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Reviews For Moment of Impact
The discussion that led to the articulation of just what was "the power that he knows not" was very well written. I felt as if I was discovering the information along with Severus and Harry, instead of having large anvils dropped on my head that shouted "This is an important thing for what happens to the plot next". Very nicely revealed! Now I'm wondering if Voldy was experiencing pain from Harry's scars healing. Well done! I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.
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