A beautiful portrait of the last days of summer and the growth that Harry’s experienced.
| Title: Return to Shell Cottage
| 10 Apr 2011 9:23 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I love the relaxing quality of the last part of this chapter! The beach scenes are so tranquil... As for the dreams-- they make my own look rather mundane! Glad Harry didn't have any actual nightmares! Also, I misread one of his final dreams: I swear I thought you said he dreamed that Aunt Marge was driving a Muggle taxi through the Forbidden Forest! MY MISTAKE! But it gave me a terrific laugh, so thanks for the inspiration!!!
I love your imagination, great writing, great story!
| Title: Return to Shell Cottage
| 21 Mar 2011 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter love the healing here very moving clever about Neville
| Title: Return to Shell Cottage
| 21 Mar 2011 12:26 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Another great chapter. You write the relationship between Harry and Snape so clearly that I can't imagine it not continuing.
Another wonderful chapter! Thanks for posting.
Finally back on his broom, yay! Great chapter!
I really like how you've handled the gradually growing relationship between Harry and Severus. Since we always see Snape through Harry's eyes in the books, we never get a true depiction of who he really is as an adult. Snape would have scared the pants off of me as a kid too, and I think Harry comes to realize this later in life. Good job!
Awesome chapter! A bit of an emotional rollercoaster for Harry, but I really loved the interlude at Shell Cottage and how their relationship is developing.
| Title: Return to Shell Cottage
| 19 Mar 2011 4:41 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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What a nice chapter. Snape and Harry get along so well now. It's really too bad that with the Voldie situation that Snape couldn't be Harry's new guardian.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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