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Reviews For Moment of Impact
You have amazing insight into the characters. Your Harry and Snape are so wonderfully 3 dimensional and have so much emotional depth. The symbolism, introspection, and character exploration is brilliant. Thank you for showing us Harry's talents, empathy and kindness, and Snape's genius, passion and wonderful snark. Their reconciliation is believable and touching. I'm so glad you gave the tragic Prince's Tale the happy ending it deserved. Thanks for sharing this with us - I'm off to read the sequel now! :D
Especially the last chapter. After seeing DH2 and crying my way through the scenes of Snape's death and his memories, it was nice to read something that had him survive and have a happy ending. I kind of needed that.
Author's Response: Tthanks for the nice review. The sequel (Regards Harry) is in process and up to chapter 17 (I think) on this site. I'm off to see DH2 tonight and have been told to bring tissues... SS
Author's Response: High praise. Thanks! I know how many H/S fics are out there in fandom world. Glad you liked my take on "how it could have been." SS
The only thing I think could have made this better would have been if it was longer. The final chapter does work and I can see why you didn't carry it on but I almost wish you had, there was so much more that could have been said and done on the back of this story. *10
One thing and I don't know if anyone else mentioned it... Harry's Anamagus is a Doe... That is a female deer... Author's Response: LOL! I know...rather unconventional to say the least (picking a female animagus form for a male character) but it seemed right in my mind anyway. And "Ray is a drop of golden sun..." Glad you liked the story, SS |
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