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Title: How it All Played Out 17 Nov 2011 10:35 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely Brilliant!
Title: How it All Played Out 05 Sep 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: astutia (Signed) [Report This]
    Just finished reading... amazing fic. Loved it! I like the way you wrapped it up, too. You managed to cover so much in one chapter, but it didn't feel rushed at all. Perfect.
Title: How it All Played Out 04 Aug 2011 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    One of the BEST HP fics I've ever read. I was hooked from the start and marathoned all chapters in one go because I just couldn't stop reading. Your version of canon is creative, well thought out and well-written. I love how you expand on the unresolved things in canon that are hinted at: Harry's grief for Sirius, the Blood Quill, Animagi, Occlumency. Great use of Shell Cottage and I love the Muggle culture references! :D

    You have amazing insight into the characters. Your Harry and Snape are so wonderfully 3 dimensional and have so much emotional depth. The symbolism, introspection, and character exploration is brilliant. Thank you for showing us Harry's talents, empathy and kindness, and Snape's genius, passion and wonderful snark. Their reconciliation is believable and touching. I'm so glad you gave the tragic Prince's Tale the happy ending it deserved.

    Thanks for sharing this with us - I'm off to read the sequel now! :D
Title: How it All Played Out 27 Jul 2011 2:40 am
Reviewer: Potterlover2009 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is even better then the movie I like this and the next one as well
Title: How it All Played Out 22 Jul 2011 6:08 am
Reviewer: reven (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it, loved it.

    Especially the last chapter. After seeing DH2 and crying my way through the scenes of Snape's death and his memories, it was nice to read something that had him survive and have a happy ending. I kind of needed that.
Title: How it All Played Out 16 Jul 2011 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Just to let you know, I loved the story. I cried when I got to the later chapters and smiled at the thought of Severus' clock. The last few paragraphes really got to me, making me both smile and cry. Congratulations on writing such a wonderful story!

    Author's Response:

    Tthanks for the nice review.  The sequel (Regards Harry) is in process and up to chapter 17 (I think) on this site.  I'm off to see DH2 tonight and have been told to bring tissues...

    SS

Title: How it All Played Out 11 Jul 2011 3:38 pm
Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely! I loved your caring Snape - he was funny and snarky, but still really cared about Harry. Very well written.
Title: How it All Played Out 21 Jun 2011 7:05 am
Reviewer: Xedra (Signed) [Report This]
    Seriously one of THE best Harry/Snape stories I've ever read. *sigh* Loved it!

    Author's Response:

    High praise.  Thanks!  I know how many H/S fics are out there in fandom world.  Glad you liked my take on "how it could have been."

    SS

Title: How it All Played Out 19 Jun 2011 11:07 pm
Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow, that was truly an incredible story, thank you so much for your fantastic attention to detail and plot, and i loved the character development
Title: Trust 05 Jun 2011 12:42 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am doing a reread of this story and it just struck me I have not given you nearly enough "this is so wonderful!" reviews. Here goes .... This story is so wonderful!! I love Snape mentors Harry stories. I particularly enjoy seeing how each author shows the resolution of their hostility and the acceptance of each others strengths and weaknesses. Your take is very realistic to me - measured, and entirely plausible.

    I am enjoying this story just as much the second time around (of course, being in my SIXTH decade of life my memory gets fuzzy faster!!!). I am also reading Regards, Harry. I can't stand the wait on that one so I am keeping up with it on fanfiction.net instead of here.

    Thanks for giving us a glimpse of a Snape and Harry who can come to trust and care for each other!

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