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Title: How it All Played Out 19 May 2011 3:59 pm
Reviewer: Abhorrent Mongrel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well written, kept me hooked enough to read it in one sitting.

    The only thing I think could have made this better would have been if it was longer.

    The final chapter does work and I can see why you didn't carry it on but I almost wish you had, there was so much more that could have been said and done on the back of this story.

    *10
Title: How it All Played Out 15 Apr 2011 8:15 pm
Reviewer: fictionfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story and kudos for sticking with it for so long...
    One thing and I don't know if anyone else mentioned it...
    Harry's Anamagus is a Doe...
    That is a female deer...

    Author's Response:

    LOL!  I know...rather unconventional to say the least (picking a female animagus form for a male character) but it seemed right in my mind anyway. 

    And "Ray is a drop of golden sun..."

    Glad you liked the story,

    SS

Title: Return to Shell Cottage 10 Apr 2011 9:23 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the relaxing quality of the last part of this chapter! The beach scenes are so tranquil... As for the dreams-- they make my own look rather mundane! Glad Harry didn't have any actual nightmares! Also, I misread one of his final dreams: I swear I thought you said he dreamed that Aunt Marge was driving a Muggle taxi through the Forbidden Forest! MY MISTAKE! But it gave me a terrific laugh, so thanks for the inspiration!!!
Title: How it All Played Out 09 Apr 2011 4:08 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome awesome awesome!!
Title: How it All Played Out 08 Apr 2011 3:20 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh what a lovely ending! I have really enjoyed reading this story and thank you very much for the regular updates and for seeing it through to its end :) I would definately reccommend people read it
Title: The Last Week 08 Apr 2011 2:46 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the bonding time with Severus there! so sweet :)
Title: How it All Played Out 07 Apr 2011 6:24 pm
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing!
Title: How it All Played Out 07 Apr 2011 3:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story thank you so much
Title: How it All Played Out 07 Apr 2011 4:44 am
Reviewer: ravensinclaire (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved it, especially the last charter. The free flowing style was perfect to wrap up this truly excellent story. Thank you for sharing.
Title: How it All Played Out 07 Apr 2011 1:53 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. A good end to a good story. Kudos.

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