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Reviews For Moment of Impact
The only thing I think could have made this better would have been if it was longer. The final chapter does work and I can see why you didn't carry it on but I almost wish you had, there was so much more that could have been said and done on the back of this story. *10
One thing and I don't know if anyone else mentioned it... Harry's Anamagus is a Doe... That is a female deer... Author's Response: LOL! I know...rather unconventional to say the least (picking a female animagus form for a male character) but it seemed right in my mind anyway. And "Ray is a drop of golden sun..." Glad you liked the story, SS
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