Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Detention 02 Jan 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful start to you story! and you said this is your first! great two chapters.

    Poor Harry. can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully you won't be waiting long! Next chappie up very soon :)
Title: Mishap 02 Jan 2011 3:21 am
Reviewer: Tabetha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not bad. My only complaint would be that you switch between past tense and present tense throughout the chapter. And as a friendly reminder, stories flow better and read better when they are in past tense. Such as 'he said' instead of 'he says.' Things like that.

    Author's Response: Ah. I'm afraid this story will all be in present tense - unless I accidentally drift into past tense which I assume I have done :/ Later chapters will hopefully have less tense confusion as I think I have a handle on it as the chapters progress. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review - if you continue to read and you spot any more tense confusion, please don't hesitate to point it out to me and I'll amend it.  
Title: Detention 01 Jan 2011 11:54 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great first two chapters! I can't wait to see what happens to Harry. Update soon ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up within the next day or two hopefully :) 
Title: Detention 01 Jan 2011 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh oh! What's happened to Harry?

    Poor kid. I hope that he's not hurt too badly.

    Great chappie, can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Thank you! All will be revealed...Next chappie up soon :)
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 10:06 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon :D

    Author's Response: I see you found me on ffnet as well! :) Thank you for reading! The new chapter on ff will be up soon - it's almost done...kind of haha.
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Polpolaris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really well written and an interesting start! Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review :) I hope you stick with me on this!
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 9:24 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really good so far!!

    Author's Response: Big thank you!
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 4:28 am
Reviewer: Perry (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! Interesting writing style too. Can't wait for another chapter :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up soon :)
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 3:54 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVED IT! Can't wait to see where this goes!

    Author's Response: Thank you :)
Title: Mishap 01 Jan 2011 3:09 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I would love to see where you take this story

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up soon. :)

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5