Wonderful chapter. I think you nailed Draco's characterization - slightly nosy, trying to turn over a new leaf, but still unable to recognize personal boundaries or the fact that he can't just undo his actions with a "sorry."
Author's Response: Thank you for reading dear! I'm going to try and keep as close to canon with Draco as I can I think. Though things might change eventually. Glad you're enjoying this :) The next chapter is up now!
| Title: A Small Realisation
| 20 Apr 2011 9:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Kinz (Anonymous)
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I love this story! I hope you continue wtih this...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading - I am determined to see this one through to the end :D
| Title: A Small Realisation
| 06 Apr 2011 7:48 am
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| Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous)
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PLEASE update soon! This is so good!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! The next chapter is now up - hope you enjoy it :D
That was very good and I liked that chapter a lot. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, please update as soon as you possibly can.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying it :) The next chapter is now up (or at least should be shortly)...
I'm sorry, this sounds like a really great story that I'd love to read, but I severely dislike the use of the present tense... he feels tired, he sits alone, he looks out the window. I'm so used to reading fiction in the past tense that this is hard for me to even look at. I realize this is your style of writing and am not criticizing you for it in the least, just letting you know that I would love to see it in the past tense... he felt tired, he sat alone, he looked out the window, etc. Until then I'm going to pass for now. Otherwise it looks interesting.
Author's Response: I decided to use present tense just to try something different, and it's posed a bit of a challenge, but I like that. A few people aren't happy with present tense, so I don't blame you for not reading, I'm just sorry I couldn't convince you to give it a try.
Wow. Poor, poor Harry! Good thing Snape knew what to do there, or else Harry would have been in big trouble.
Can't wait for more, sounds like things are starting to unravel!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) The next chapter should appear on recent stories soon!
Lovely!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Next chapter is submitted so should appear shortly x
| Title: A Small Realisation
| 15 Feb 2011 10:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Woderfully taughtly written chapter thank you so much
Perfect chapter :)
Author's Response: Why thank you :) The next chapter has been submitted and should show up very soon!
wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Poor Harry and Severus. Hopefully Harry can see snape is trying to help, and tell a little of whats going on.
Author's Response: Thank you :) the next one should hopefully be up soon, just waiting for it to appear in recent stories :)
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