I’ve read your story several times, and thought it was about time to leave some reviews for your wonderful story. This is a compelling first chapter.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Nov 2016 10:15 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter thank you
Oh, facinating first chapter; I love your vivid descriptions and the slow build-up to Harry finding himself at Snape's door. Vernon and Petunia's method, simply dumping Harry with no explanation, feels very in character.
I absolutely love it so far. Your writing is brilliant! Can't wait for more!
Great chapter! I loved that Harry sleepily/accidently called him "Dad," by mistake. Great job.
Great chapter! I loved that Harry sleepily/accidently called him "Dad," by mistake. Great job.
Oh wow! I'm so sorry that I didn't read this story sooner. Great start.
I'm assuming that Snape is stuck with Harry and vice-versa! Poor kid never gets a break.
Poor Harry and poor Snape. Stupid Dursleys.
Great chapter! You really capture Harry's fear as he knocks on the door and waits for someone to open it. I love the description of the neighborhoods and how you show the economic differences betweeen them.
Excellent chapter!
Yes! I love it! Great idea, and great start. muah haha!
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