The mirror is such a nice magical touch. It’s fun to see Snape’s preconceived notions of Harry operating in full force.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 17 Nov 2016 10:26 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the interaction between Harry and Severus and Harry's surprise at Severus' humble origins. A bit risky reading the letter but, then again, Harry's always been portrayed as impulsive!
Ooh, I'm guessing that the contents of the envelope will reveal very bad news indeed for Harry. LOL!
Loving this story already! Great job. Onto the next chappie...
Excellent chapter! I'm amazed by your attention to detail!
Oh, this is good. This is real good! The descriptions are lovely, a pleasure to read even of the surroundings. Wonderful job. I am gleeful at the prospect of this story. Yay.
More please! :)
This is a fascinating beginning! I am really looking forward to your next update!
Well done!
I am really excited to see where this goes! Good job and update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 2
| 03 Jan 2011 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: roz (Anonymous)
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Wonderful use of details. You've totally hooked me!
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