I really like your characterization of both Snape and Harry.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 17 Nov 2016 10:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting; I like the way in which you've used Snape's standards (i.e. dressing for dinner) as an 'in' for him to discover Harry's abuse. His mild deception about the locale also seems very in character.
Oh dear. Poor Harry.
I wonder what will happen when Harry comes to dinner wearing Dudley's old clothes, or when Snape relises that Harry is not as spoilt as he believes.
This story is very well written, and I love the way that you keep Harry and Snape in character. Good job!
Ah! Poor Harry! hehehe...
I love your Snape and that we get his insight a lot in the chapter. He picks on Harry, but he's also teaching him a little.
Excellent chapter!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Jan 2011 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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This is magical. I wonder if Harry will have a dress shirt. Maybe he has one from school. Can't wait to see what happens.
I am very much enjoying this! Very interested to see more. I like that you have Harry being angry and surly about the whole thing, instead of cowed and out-of-character. Looking forward to an update!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Jan 2011 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Halfblood (Anonymous)
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Oooh I hope you can keep updating really regularly as I'm looking forward to reading more. What will Snape say when he realises that Harry has no nice clothes and is half starved?
I loved the line:
“Potter, the martyr,” Snape mocked. “Potter, the hero, wasn’t enough for you?”
You're doing a fab job of keeping everyone in character :)
This is a great story so far.
Wow. This is great. I love it. What drama! And angst! Both Harry and Snape are so in character. Snape's speech is so perfect. Fantastic job! I can't wait to read more!! Please update when you can, and thank you for sharing and posting this story!
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