I’m anticipating the reveal in the next chapter. I love the idea of a magical tailor, who can floo in as needed.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 17 Nov 2016 10:42 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter; I loved Harry's reaction to the idea of a new wardrobe and the interaction between the characters was very well written
Hmmm....Snape has got to be getting suspicious about why Harry won't take his top off.
Poor kid. He must be so embarassed. I hope that Snape finds out the truth soon, and Harry can begin to heal.
Good chappie. Onto the next...
Wow, this is an awesome chapter!! I love this story! Les is amazing. Great original character!! And great drama. I can't wait to read the next chapter. luckily for me, it is here! :D
| Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Jan 2011 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Excellent! More! More! :D
My one comment is that Snape is maybe too nice for canon...but that's okay. Sometimes it gets unpalatable to watch the full breadth of canon Snape's nastiness. I like your Snape.
Can't wait for more! The updating speed you have is really delightful.
You have a good story here. I like it, please update soon. :)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Jan 2011 4:24 am
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| Reviewer: mafalda (Anonymous)
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Ohh what a cliffhanger :D I like how you made Harry defensive and angry at Snape like that. Love this story!
Oh, goody. I love the idea and the way you write. what's going to happen mext? i'm sure Snape's gonna find out about the dursleys' abuse, eh? can't wait to find out how he reacts!! update quick!
Just what kind of scars is Harry hiding?
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