Wonderful chapter. It’s realistic that Harry would be skeptical of gifts having strings attached. I like that we’re learning more about Severus.
Why does she say "for you two boys" at the end there? Does she mean severus and his father?
| Title: Chapter 7
| 17 Nov 2016 10:50 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely little mystery thank you
Brilliant chapter; I love the way in which you're portraying Harry- his suspicion and mistrust are very realistic reactions in this scenario, as are Snape's irritation and confusion. The revelation about 'two boys' is intreaging but, then again, it might just be Severus and his father to whom she is referring
Oh no! Harry is going to do something foolish. I' worried for him.
I hope Snape wises up before Harry puts himself in danger.
Good chappie.
I love the twist that you have thrown us at the end and am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
Nice chapter! I wonder if Harry will try to run away after this, it seemed as if that had been his plan. I can't help but believe that it is going to be very difficult to give Snape the slip. :) I am very curious about Snape's brother. Thanks for the quick update!
its really good
please update soon
i love the tension between severus and harry :)
| Title: Chapter 7
| 07 Jan 2011 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Well, Harry is not having it easy. I'm curious where he would run...
Severus will be furious, I know, but to other side I think he later catch on what is going in Harry's head...
I'm looking forward the next chapter =o)
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