I love the idea of burning relicts of the past in a fire pit.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 17 Nov 2016 11:01 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Severus a lovely chapter
I hope your son is doing better! How terrifying for you both!
My six-year-old just had her appendix removed about ten days ago. NOT fun!
I am glad I stumbled across this story last evening. I think you're doing a great job with the characterization.
Sorry about your son: sounds like a nasty accident :(
Another really good chapter with great interaction between the characters; I loved the portrait idea and I think that the scenario you've set up would certainly tug on Harry's heartstrings.
I'm so very sorry to hear about your son. I hope that he heals well and I'll pray for him!
Ouch! Hope your boy is doing better.
Gosh, I'm sorry to hear about your little boy, what a shock. I hope he is well on the road to a full recovery, it sounds like it was a bad break.
I am really enjoying your story a lot. Harry's resentment and distrust is really real and not over the top. And I like a more reluctant Snape. I'm very much looking forward to new chapters.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 20 Jan 2011 1:37 am
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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Don't worry about the length! You just focus on what you need to do right now, and we'll be waiting for you to come back. Hope your son makes a quick recovery. Having a sick little one is rough!
Oh dear, I hope your son heals well! Good chapter by the way. Don't worry, take your time with the next! :)
| Title: Chapter 10
| 19 Jan 2011 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous)
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Sorry about your son. :( I love your story. I'll keep an eye out for your update.
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