I've really enjoyed these last few chapters! It's good to see Harry and Severus slowly building up trust and a better relationship. I'm glad that Harry explained why he ran away and that Severus was understanding. It was also good that Severus tried to make Harry see that he isn't bound by the prophecy.
Looking forward to more!
hmmm very nice *S* more please!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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AWWWWW Was that a bonding moment.....maybe :) Absolutley loved, like usual! Hope your little one is still getting better !!!
Still loving this story and the fact that you update regularly. Snape is a sad but wise wizard. Now if only Harry can trust him enough to take his advice.
I'm glad that Harry opened up to Snape and confided to him about his feelings and why he ran away. I'm also very glad that Snape told him that he is not responsible for winning the war, despite what Dumbles told him.
So looking forward to the next update. Great job capturing your character's feelings.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 3:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Marlie (Anonymous)
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I'm glad Snape is opening up a bit, great chapter
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 11:41 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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Please update. This story is awsome. Snape is in character and so is Harry and the place they are at with eachother, the building of trust and understanding is well paced, but like all epiphanies they come swiftly at times too. I think you are doing a swell job of writing and hope you will continue soon.
wow!!! very cool. What made Severus say that?! It's a very typical Harry situation, but Severus! I mean, yeah, it's pretty predictable, but still!!
Really enjoying this - and the speed of the updates! Keep it coming please!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 29 Jan 2011 6:27 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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I love the ending to this chapter. The picture of Harry realizing that Snape somehow feels he has no choices, and yet telling Harry (who feels he can't escape his destiny) that he does have choices.
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