That was a lovely moment between Harry and Snape, though realistic with its abrupt end.
| Title: Chapter 16
| 17 Nov 2016 2:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Aww, the last paragraph is so sweet. A truly gorgeous chapter with wonderful character interaction.
| Title: Chapter 16
| 08 Feb 2011 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous)
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I stumbled on this story last night and I love it! Update soon! I've never used this website before so I'll be constantly checking to see if there is an update! :)
| Title: Chapter 16
| 07 Feb 2011 6:16 am
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| Reviewer: murdrax (Anonymous)
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ohh how sweet of harry to give severus all the stufff that has no mention of james or his friends!!
Awwww, fabulous chapter! Wonderful job with everything. I also enjoyed reading Lily's letters. You did a good job creating her voice. She seemed real. :) I wonder what and how Snape is thinking and feeling now. And what happens next? Great story! thanks for the quick updates!!!
| Title: Chapter 16
| 06 Feb 2011 11:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Dan (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! My favorite so far! Harry's gesture was really nice, leaving the box for Snape.
Aww nice chapter, I really enjoyed it.
:-D Poor Snape.
| Title: Chapter 16
| 06 Feb 2011 9:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Laughing Snape...it is hard to imagine but I can see it =D
Very nice chapter =o)
Author's Response: Does the laughing work? I was worried it was a little too over the top / out of character. What do you think?
such a nice job.. really like how they are growing together... making Snape less snappish...
wish I could get the update chapters notified to me.. i checked the box that said update favorites and I used to get them but know I dont...
Author's Response: I've been talking to the admins and they are aware of this glitch. They are hoping to have it fixed soon. Thanks for following my story. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
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