The loss Harry feels at having to leave (aaargh, meddling Dumbledore!) and his painful feelings of loneliness are so palpable.
| Title: Chapter 18
| 02 May 2021 1:35 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Aww maybe snape's wards are keeping hedwig away and he doesn't realize it. Dumbledore shouldn't get a say whatsoever, legally snape has the final say of where harry lives and if both he and harry are fine with spinners end then that should be end of conversation
| Title: Chapter 18
| 17 Nov 2016 2:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved that awkward little conversation, with Harry wanting to leave some of his things at Severus' house but not sure whether he could and Severus wanting Harry to know that he would provide for him (both robes and a home). Harry's thoughts on his birthday are also bittersweetly endearing.
While interestingly headed in a direction all its own, this story is written so well, and is so in keeping with the characters, that I get lost in it. Snape's voice is strongly and clearly written in these lines. The emotional responses of both Harry and Snape feel spot-on. I've both choked up with sadness and laughed aloud while reading, and look forward to continued chapters.
| Title: Chapter 18
| 13 Feb 2011 3:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Haten (Anonymous)
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Hello, I'm french and I can tell you that after what I've been reading from your story I expect a lot from it !
(oh god, so much pressure now :)
Not many stories are not ooc. then go on !
haten
Good chapter, I liked Harry's little reflection on his birthday.
| Title: Chapter 18
| 12 Feb 2011 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Okay, the ending was a little poignant, but I "know" that Severus is going to come through for Harry. Right? Please...
| Title: Chapter 18
| 12 Feb 2011 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous)
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Sooooooo gooooood!!! Write more please!!
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