I’m anticipating the reveal in the next chapter. I love the idea of a magical tailor, who can floo in as needed.
I like how Harry’s defiant facade is slowly unraveling to reveal his true vulnerability that lies beneath.
I really like your characterization of both Snape and Harry.
The mirror is such a nice magical touch. It’s fun to see Snape’s preconceived notions of Harry operating in full force.
I’ve read your story several times, and thought it was about time to leave some reviews for your wonderful story. This is a compelling first chapter.
“I will gladly write an essay on my recklessness after you finish yours on your indifference … in our first year, nobody would help Hermione from troll unless we jumped in, in my second year no teacher recognized a basilisk and Ginny would die if I was not reckless, in my third year you have actively worked on my innocent godfather being killed (‘All I have to do is call the dementors once we get out of the Willow. They’ll be very pleased to see you, Black … pleased enough to give you a little kiss, I daresay. …’), and so forth. Why in the world I should trust you for a second that you really care about my welfare?”
| Title: Chapter 19
| 02 May 2021 1:41 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Ok you win I like your snape now lol that Dorothy bit sent me over the rainbow *cue crickets at my lame dad joke*
| Title: Chapter 18
| 02 May 2021 1:35 am
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Aww maybe snape's wards are keeping hedwig away and he doesn't realize it. Dumbledore shouldn't get a say whatsoever, legally snape has the final say of where harry lives and if both he and harry are fine with spinners end then that should be end of conversation
| Title: Chapter 11
| 01 May 2021 8:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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It upset me a little that harry had to apologize for snape treatment of him, like it's perfectly acceptable that snape tormented him because of something his father did. But that ending was so screwed up. How dare snape?! I hope harry tells him what did
Why does she say "for you two boys" at the end there? Does she mean severus and his father?
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