wonderful chapter!
Poor Harry. i can't wait to see what happens when snape confronts him about the "not taking his shirt off" thing.
and, LOL on Les. Snape with a gay Tailor! haha that had me giggling!
Oh wow, another amazing two installments! I'm incredibly anxious to see what happens next. I really love your characterization of Harry in this, as I've mentioned. It seems very true-to-form, but also heartbreaking. I also like you portrayal of Snape-- it's very honest in a lot of ways. Your writing is really solid and your style is pleasing to read. You have a flair for being able to build up the emotion of a scene for me, without tipping over into melodrama. The matter-of-fact presentation makes it pack all the more punch to me.
Truly looking forward to more!
I'm LOVING this story! Please, do continue to update frequently! I like how Snape's caring side is beginning to seep through.
Can't wait for more :)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 04 Jan 2011 8:56 am
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It was so nice of you to give us so many chapters in one day! Can't wait to see what Snape makes out of this.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 04 Jan 2011 8:41 am
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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I've been reading this story, and feel I should review because that is the kind thing to do. :), so I am in looooove with this story and check for updates hourly I swear. Thankies.
oooh...the plot thickens. I liked the inclusion of Les in here. He showed another side of Snape nicely, that the can get along mostly with others. :D Though, my only question is that Snape saw the butterfly bruises on Harry in the previous chapter, now wouldn't he be a bit more cautious with Harry in regards to having the boy change in the presence of another with just that suspicion itself? I mean, Snape said with Les that Les's parents clearly were ignorant if they couldn't tell that their son was gay since Snape could. So isn't he doing the same basically? :D Good chapter. Love the frequent updates.
I'm loving this! Harry and Severus are so stubborn and in character. I can't wait to see what happens when Severus figures out/finds out why Harry is reluctant to take off his shirt. So far we've seen Severus change a tiny bit and I'm sure Harry will come around soon, though not before "kicking and screaming" some more. Great job!
Great Job! Thanks for the speedy updates :D Keep up the great work/writing!!
I WANT TO READ MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRREEE!! this is so good! When Sev finds out what Harry's hiding he's gonna blow a gasket!
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