| Title: Chapter 4
| 03 Jan 2011 10:12 pm
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| Reviewer: lex (Anonymous)
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omg yesss, +874028954 points to you for updating so quickly! Thank you! I love this story. I can't wait for the abuse confrontation between the two, however it may be handled. Please keep writing. You're an awesome writer and your quick updates make you even better! :)
Author's Response: Hehehe, want to beta for me? You'd get even faster updates ;-)
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Jan 2011 9:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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This is magical. I wonder if Harry will have a dress shirt. Maybe he has one from school. Can't wait to see what happens.
I am very much enjoying this! Very interested to see more. I like that you have Harry being angry and surly about the whole thing, instead of cowed and out-of-character. Looking forward to an update!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Jan 2011 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Halfblood (Anonymous)
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Oooh I hope you can keep updating really regularly as I'm looking forward to reading more. What will Snape say when he realises that Harry has no nice clothes and is half starved?
I loved the line:
“Potter, the martyr,” Snape mocked. “Potter, the hero, wasn’t enough for you?”
You're doing a fab job of keeping everyone in character :)
This is a great story so far.
Wow. This is great. I love it. What drama! And angst! Both Harry and Snape are so in character. Snape's speech is so perfect. Fantastic job! I can't wait to read more!! Please update when you can, and thank you for sharing and posting this story!
Love this so far! A very unique take on the "Snape as Harry's guardian" plotline. Sev is in for a surprise when he realizes that Harry is not the spoiled brat he takes him for...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, this is good. This is real good! The descriptions are lovely, a pleasure to read even of the surroundings. Wonderful job. I am gleeful at the prospect of this story. Yay.
Yes! I love it! Great idea, and great start. muah haha!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 03 Jan 2011 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: jam (Anonymous)
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This is good. I especially like the fact that the story starts off fast without a lot of buildup or background reading. And the feelings of anger and frustration that are expressed on Harry's part are realistic and believable. Keep going! (The rating is good, but not terribly high because I need to read more of it first.)
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