This is a wonderful story, thus far. Your narrative is wonderfully descriptive and your dialogue true to character. Even your Briticisms are spot on. Bravo. I eagerly await more. I was awaiting a new and well written Harry and Snape story. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jan 2011 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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Wow this is getting good. I really like your style of writing. I look forward to the next installment.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jan 2011 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: lex (Anonymous)
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Hey! I really like this story! I feel like both of them are pretty in character and that makes me happy. :) You're a good writer as well, it's nice reading what you write. Please, please update, such a good plot bunny can not go to waste! :p
Fast update! Can't wait for another.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 02 Jan 2011 8:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Wow! That was quick! But where is the next one? =D I'm only kidding =D
I think Harry will have shock of his life when he read the letter (or will)... well, I¨m looking forward Severus and Harry's summer =D
| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Jan 2011 6:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Its looking good, very good! BUT WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!
Sorry *g* but I can't wait!
Oh boy, oh boy - this looks like fun.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Jan 2011 1:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Halfblood (Anonymous)
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OMG that was amazing. I could really picture everything happening in my head as I read it! I can't wait to see what happens next. Your description of the area/surroundings was really well done. I wonder if Snape is going to be really poor then, or does he just choose not to spend his money? How will he react to Harry? Can't wait to find out!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Jan 2011 8:53 am
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| Reviewer: POTTERPHILE (Anonymous)
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Good start. Please continue.
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