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Reviews For Victus per Reproba Monumentum
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Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying my story so far. I hope you continue to enjoy as the story goes on.
Severus and Remus both need a swift kick in the seat of the pants for their behavior here; Remus because he should have known how painful it would be for Harry to suddenly be back at Grimmauld Place, and Severus because he's just being a cruel git. This is no criticism of your writing though, because they are both perfectly in-character. Severus is a cruel git right now (though I hope he'll warm up to Harry eventually) and Remus, for all his intelligence, can be very dim-witted when it comes to emotional needs-deliberately so, I think. I really want to shake him and the other Order members too. For all that Harry is so crucial to the war, his emotional and psychological well-being does not seem to be high on the priority list. Well, anyway, I really enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you think everyone seems to be in-character. That was my number one requirement while writing this.
The poor boy does not need to be in that house! Great chappie firefly! Author's Response: Thanks. :) |
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