Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 05 Feb 2011 9:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor kid. :( Snape's quite in character.
Title: Chapter 2 04 Feb 2011 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    hmm... it's rather sad that no one is noticing Harry's distress. Well, in Snape's case, he's just ignoring it, but still. I'd have thought Remus would have at least tried to comfort Harry. Very nice chapter. You're capturing Harry's grief nicely. :D
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jan 2011 10:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting first interaction with Severus and harry thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks.
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jan 2011 4:45 am
Reviewer: EchoingWhispers (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful story! i can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying my story so far.  I hope you continue to enjoy as the story goes on.
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jan 2011 12:25 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh Poor Harry
Title: Chapter 2 15 Jan 2011 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I feel so badly for Harry. He's rescued from the Dursleys, but only to go to Grimmauld Place which is so painful emotionally for him now.

    Severus and Remus both need a swift kick in the seat of the pants for their behavior here; Remus because he should have known how painful it would be for Harry to suddenly be back at Grimmauld Place, and Severus because he's just being a cruel git.

    This is no criticism of your writing though, because they are both perfectly in-character. Severus is a cruel git right now (though I hope he'll warm up to Harry eventually) and Remus, for all his intelligence, can be very dim-witted when it comes to emotional needs-deliberately so, I think. I really want to shake him and the other Order members too. For all that Harry is so crucial to the war, his emotional and psychological well-being does not seem to be high on the priority list.

    Well, anyway, I really enjoyed the chapter and am looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I'm glad you think everyone seems to be in-character.  That was my number one requirement while writing this.
Title: Chapter 2 15 Jan 2011 6:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. I forgot how cruel Snape can actually be.

    The poor boy does not need to be in that house!

    Great chappie firefly!

    Author's Response: Thanks. :)

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