Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 17 Jun 2011 3:54 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... poor Harry. Being sick suuuucks.

    Loving this, so far.
Title: Chapter 3 26 Feb 2011 9:51 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    That was some argument Molly and the others were having - I'd like to have been a fly on the wall. At least Snape was being..pleasant.
Title: Chapter 3 05 Feb 2011 9:50 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, Harry got helped by Snape. :) Yay!

    I liked the descriptions and emotions in this chapter. Things seemed a little bit blank though, mostly the other characters when Snape and Harry were talking and the other characters didn't notice anything. It didn't seem that believable. It might work better if Harry hadn't been able to get into the kitchen. It doesn't seem as if going into the kitchen added anything to the situation, and it makes the adult's lack of interest and notice distracting while reading. It seemed out of character for Remus, Molly and Dumbledore to not notice as they are the three adults who seem the most interested in Harry's care.

    Otherwise, I like your Snape. He is very Snapish, and situation Harry has himself in is very intriguing. I like your Remus, and I want to listen to more of Snape's thoughts. Good job on that. :)
Title: Chapter 3 04 Feb 2011 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Why is everyone ignorning Harry so much except Snape? This is the one question I'm wondering about. Very nice chapter again. I like the slight change in Snape's demeanor. He's slowly changing. Again, nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 3 27 Jan 2011 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved their interaction and the odd feeling Severus is getting! Thank you

    Author's Response:

    I too loved their first interaction together.  Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 3 27 Jan 2011 7:44 pm
Reviewer: dracois4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story.
Title: Chapter 3 27 Jan 2011 5:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry.

    I'm chuckling at Remus' reaction. It's obvious that Snape is having very conflicting feelings over Harry, but he's not sure why.

    Great chappie as usual.

    Author's Response: Thank you.

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