| Title: Chapter 7
| 23 Feb 2011 5:52 am
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| Reviewer: me (Anonymous)
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I like your narration and your Remus.
Your Story is Brilliant!! I love it, and am super excited for it to continue...hope you will!
Hello Firefly. This is not really a review of this chapter as I've not read it yet, but I saw Pandora's note in the shoutbox and wanted to say how pleased I was to see you posting here. I found the story on ff just before you posted the first chapter here, but had only read the first few chapters while noting it as something I was really going to enjoy. I much prefer to read on this site - the font is easier to read, and my slow dial up computer copes with it better - but I decided to wait to read more until several new-to- me chapters were up, and then have a really good read right from the beginning. That's planned for this coming weekend! It might have been better to say glad to see the story here a bit earlier, but I really hope you feel its worthwhile to continue here - if not I will definitely be searching it out on ff.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 22 Feb 2011 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Katherine (Anonymous)
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It is definatly worth it to post here, I love the story. I absolutly adore it. Please post here!!!!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 22 Feb 2011 2:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Long (Anonymous)
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I've never written a review before but I really like your story! It's great! I really like stories where Snape forgot stuff but gets a reminder from the past.I hope you keep posting it here.
Sorry Firefly, I was in the hospital, otherwise you know that I would have been the first to review.
Poor Harry. His friends are ignoring him, the pain and grief over losing Sirius is starting to close in on him. He needs a break the poor kid.
Great chappie Firefly.
Oh dear Firefly. You know at least that "I' love your story, and really want you to continue posting it here.
I love this part the best. When Severus finds out that harry is his son. It's not going to be so fun when Harry finds out that the greasy git of the dungeon is his father!
I was excited to see I had a notice that a new chapter was up...I love reading stories where Snape's memories have been changed :D
| Title: Chapter 6
| 13 Feb 2011 11:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked the chapter but found it a little unsatisfying as I was expecting something to happen and it didn't!
Great chapter! it was a bit slow at times, but I enjoyed the interaction between Harry and Snape. I wonder what happens next!
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