| Title: Chapter 6
| 10 Feb 2011 5:13 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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I really enjoyed watching Harry and Snape learning that they could coexist rather peacefully! Also, they're each slowly getting a more well-rounded perception of the other. Lovely chapter, full of detail, and wonderfully unrushed. I'll look forward to seeing how their relationship develops once they're at Hogwarts!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 09 Feb 2011 8:01 pm
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| Reviewer: PotionsMaster (Anonymous)
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This is really interesting. I love the 'mood' the story sets(well, at least for me) I would really like if you continued.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 09 Feb 2011 8:31 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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I thought that was too cute (don't tell Snape that I said so), that he took care of Harry like that.
He must be really confused as to why he is having these conflicting feelings.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 07 Feb 2011 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter can't wait for Severus to arrive
Awww, Harry's abandoned. but I am gleeful that now he has to spent the time with Snape. Haha. Interesting take on Remus. I wonder what has made him so forgetful. He did forget that once to take his potion when he was a teacher. I liked the little descriptions about Harry's muddy shoes and things like that. I'd love to hear more about Harry, and I wonder what will happen once Snape arrives.
Good chapter! Thanks for posting your story!!
I liked the talk between Remus and Harry. Snape was good in this chapter too. There wasn't anything big distracting me. It is a good chapter. :)
Awww, Harry got helped by Snape. :) Yay!
I liked the descriptions and emotions in this chapter. Things seemed a little bit blank though, mostly the other characters when Snape and Harry were talking and the other characters didn't notice anything. It didn't seem that believable. It might work better if Harry hadn't been able to get into the kitchen. It doesn't seem as if going into the kitchen added anything to the situation, and it makes the adult's lack of interest and notice distracting while reading. It seemed out of character for Remus, Molly and Dumbledore to not notice as they are the three adults who seem the most interested in Harry's care.
Otherwise, I like your Snape. He is very Snapish, and situation Harry has himself in is very intriguing. I like your Remus, and I want to listen to more of Snape's thoughts. Good job on that. :)
Poor kid. :( Snape's quite in character.
Wow I love this. Remus is such a great character here. And Harry is very much in character too. Very canon. Good job!
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