Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 10 Jan 2011 12:14 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this is a great beginning! I'm very concerned for poor Harry. It sounds like he is in a bad way, both emotionally and physically. He is worn down by grief and exhaustion and he badly needs someone to look out for him. I like that you have Harry still dealing with Sirius' death and his emotions over that...it seemed too unrealistic that Harry coped so well in HBP.

    I'm glad that Remus came for Harry, but I'm also glad that Harry is distrustful of Remus' concern. Remus really never has been there for Harry when he needed him. And now they're at Grimmauld Place...that's got to be difficult for Harry too.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review.  Based on your comments, I have a feeling you'll enjoy the rest of the story. :)
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Victoire (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmpf. Start is very interesting. And very realistic. I'm waiting for the continuation!

    Author's Response: Glad you think the first chapter is realistic.  I hope that your feelings with regard to that continues with the rest of my story.  Thanks for the review.
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A solid intro to your story, and I can't wait to see where it goes next! Loved the fact that Remus was the one to rescue Harry, and also that he wants to discuss Sirius (unlike some stories where Remus appears to avoid Harry after Sirius' death). And HMM-- what could possibly be different about Harry's face? Could it be... !? Eagerly waiting for an update!

    Author's Response: You're review made me smile. :)  Thanks!!  I too felt like Harry got over Sirius' death too fast. 
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Your descriptions are amazing. I can almost see everything happening. So kudos to you on the chapter. I do hope that someone gives Harry something for that supposed cold of his. Again, very nice chapter.

    Author's Response: Glad you like my writing and enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 8:57 pm
Reviewer: marlie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooo I like it so far! I hope you update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks!   Glad you're enjoying it.  Since I have quite a few chapters already written, I plan to update regularly.  I just need to review them all one more time before I post.
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 5:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh firefly5151, I'm so glad that you finally came over here. I love this story, and I just know that everyone else will too.

    Poor Harry. First having to endure the abuse from the Dursleys and then being brought to Grimmauld Place.

    Looking forward to next chappie.

    Author's Response: Pandora, thanks for the insistence that I get my story over here.  Based on the review so far, I wish I got it over here sooner.  Glad you and everyone else seems to like it so far.  Thanks!!!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Jan 2011 5:40 am
Reviewer: LilySev777 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!  Glad you've enjoyed the first chapter.

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