Very sweet chapter to start with and excellent cliffie as an ending! :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Great chapter, I like the softer side you have Severus portray. It's interesting to see how the relationship develops as Harry realizes there is someone to care for him.
Oh, how could you stop there! I hope that wasn't a vision, just a nightmare. I love how caring Snape has become, and that memories or not, Harry seems to have truly won his place in Snape's heart.
| Title: Chapter 31
| 02 Oct 2011 11:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter thank you. Loved their sightseeing tour and the bus ride. I do hope that Harry has just had a nightmare!
Please don't let Sev forget his son!Harry will you look at the memories already? I loved the fact that Sev was so panicked over his child's illness that he forgot that he was a potions master. That is such a typical parent, particularly, new parent thing to do.
Please don't let Sev die! How much will it take? *counts out pieces of gum, candy, and coins*
Please write more!
I always enjoy a chapter where Harry and Snape go shopping for the first time. I hope Snape isn't going to let his guilt spoil what they have achieved so far. And whats wrong with Harry. I hope to find a new chapter with some answers waiting when I'm back off holiday!
| Title: Chapter 30
| 20 Sep 2011 12:43 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter but I think we need a medical fast!
Severus come back and help your son! That's an order!
| Title: Chapter 30
| 18 Sep 2011 6:16 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Can't wait for the next update! I love how I don't even have to read back to get the gist of the story. Great job!
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