Yeah, I reckon that would be a rather bewildering experience, considering. ^^
Nice.
"All this bright light must be getting to the greasy bat." ROFL! That line totally had me giggling in appreciation - bril!
I'm really enjoying this tale. It's nicely written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews. I'm glad to know that at least 1 person out there likes my fic and I'm not wasting my time posting it. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
I think I can empathize with Harry. I don't think I'd be very good at Occlumency. Not that "clear your mind" is all that helpful of an instruction. At least Snape's given him a book, now. The book do the poor kid some good.
Okay, Ron and Hermione are making me mad. So wrapped up in themselves! Irritating, with a side of nauseating, I say. >.-
Nicely writ. Though, I don't anticipate the first Occlumency lesson of the year going all that well...
Ah - nice touch with the bottled memories. Me likey. Love how you're building this story up. Bravo.
Y'know, I was wondering why Remus didn't just levitate his trunk, too.
Poor Harry. Stuck in that house AND having to stay with Snape. This should most certainly prove interesting...
Aw... poor Harry. Being sick suuuucks.
Loving this, so far.
Finally got around to starting in on this and I must say I'm certainly satisfied with this first chapter. Great start - I really look forward to seeing where you went with this.
Love the long chapters, even if I'm still left wanting more! Its so believable that Harry would be in denial about his relationship with Snape even though the holiday went well. He's got no reason to trust - even his so-called friends are not looking out for him. Look forward to seeing what's happening with Harry, and how Snape deals with things.
| Title: Chapter 22
| 31 May 2011 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good chaptwe I'm glas the are not falling over each other and there is still angst in their dealings
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