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Author's Response: I try not to have them do that in my stories, but of course sometimes it just happens. Thanks.
And secondly: It's the typical argument justifying Snape's classroom person with to say that brewing was so dangerous blablabla.... While that sounds reasonable enough at first glance, his actions are not conclusive with that! A frightened child is more likely to make mistakes (Neville comes to mind...). Furthermore, if safety was Snape's first priority, he'd make sure that his Slytherins didn't get away with throwing things into other students' cauldrons!!! And lauding those who do poor jobs (Goyle comes to mind...) while putting down others who actually do better jobs (Hermione could be mentioned, but also Harry and Ron are better brewers than somke of the Snakes), doesn't lead to a higher level of security. It would be a lot more convincing, if Snapes just confessed that he's been taking out his frustration and bitterness on most of his students (and mostly on Harry, just because he resembles his father - and yes! Snape started it - Harry's just been reacting to the treatment he received from him. And even if he reacted childishly - well, he is a child and Snape's supposed to be an adult and a teacher at that!). So, if Snape wants to get at Harry's good side, he should just swallow his pride and admit that the fault's on him! Sorry, just had to vent a little, because these two things disturbed an otherwise exquisitely enjoyable reading experience. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Pellegrina. I'm glad that you're liking it thus far. In response to your points, I never specify that Harry was abused. He's not appreciated by them by any means, but he's not abused in this story. Granted, yes, Harry did live in a cupboard for 10 years and was called a freak. So, yes, likely I should have included a scene with Lily get enraged about that, but I'd assume that Harry would feel ashamed to tell his mother about that and, well, Petunia calling people freaks isn't anything new. So Lily doesn't really know about the cupboard and this Harry has built up a tolerance you could say to Petunia calling him a freak. The table scene in the beginning is the only place where we see any implication that Harry was not appreciated, but this Harry is by no means physically abused as seen in a lot of fics. As you yourself mentioned it was the 'typical argument.' I just used that for that scene. However, later, when Snape and Harry have a bit of a bonding session, we do get to see Snape apologize for his behavior. It's just a little bit later in the fic. Again, thank you very much for the review.
I love the graveyard scene, Lan! Wonderful! Absolutely beautiful! LOL I"m sure it made all the Lily fans very happy, too. Author's Response: Thanks, DA. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Author's Response: I agree with you. I'm pretty sure he doesn't either. :D Thanks for the review.
I so love it Lan! Oh! I love the bookshelf! hehehe...do I detect forshadowing?...hmmm...I wonder... LOL Amazing Lan! Thank you! Author's Response: Foreshadowing? Now, why would you think that, DA? :D Thanks for the review. |
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