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Title: Awkward Homecoming 20 Jul 2022 1:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m looking forward to Snape trying to further develop a good relationship with Harry.
Title: Awkward Homecoming 21 May 2012 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    There's definitely going to be trouble ahead soon. I'm glad that Harry and Severus didn't immediately fall into a "father-son" bonding after Lily came back. It seems more realistic this way.

    Author's Response: I try not to have them do that in my stories, but of course sometimes it just happens. Thanks.
Title: Awkward Homecoming 24 Jan 2011 11:42 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story so far. Still, I have to point out two things that're irritating me. Firstly: Why the hell does Lily put up with Petunia's behaviour, and more importantly with the horrible, abusive behaviour towards her son!!!??? I'd have thought that now that Harry has a mom, she would stand up for him and not cower under her ugly, jealous sister's attitude and that of her family?! It's like their terrible actions toward Harry never took place! I'd be livid if I found out, that my little baby boy had been treated that way all the time after my "death"!
    And secondly: It's the typical argument justifying Snape's classroom person with to say that brewing was so dangerous blablabla.... While that sounds reasonable enough at first glance, his actions are not conclusive with that! A frightened child is more likely to make mistakes (Neville comes to mind...). Furthermore, if safety was Snape's first priority, he'd make sure that his Slytherins didn't get away with throwing things into other students' cauldrons!!! And lauding those who do poor jobs (Goyle comes to mind...) while putting down others who actually do better jobs (Hermione could be mentioned, but also Harry and Ron are better brewers than somke of the Snakes), doesn't lead to a higher level of security. It would be a lot more convincing, if Snapes just confessed that he's been taking out his frustration and bitterness on most of his students (and mostly on Harry, just because he resembles his father - and yes! Snape started it - Harry's just been reacting to the treatment he received from him. And even if he reacted childishly - well, he is a child and Snape's supposed to be an adult and a teacher at that!). So, if Snape wants to get at Harry's good side, he should just swallow his pride and admit that the fault's on him!
    Sorry, just had to vent a little, because these two things disturbed an otherwise exquisitely enjoyable reading experience.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review, Pellegrina. I'm glad that you're liking it thus far. In response to your points, I never specify that Harry was abused. He's not appreciated by them by any means, but he's not abused in this story. Granted, yes, Harry did live in a cupboard for 10 years and was called a freak. So, yes, likely I should have included a scene with Lily get enraged about that, but I'd assume that Harry would feel ashamed to tell his mother about that and, well, Petunia calling people freaks isn't anything new. So Lily doesn't really know about the cupboard and this Harry has built up a tolerance you could say to Petunia calling him a freak. The table scene in the beginning is the only place where we see any implication that Harry was not appreciated, but this Harry is by no means physically abused as seen in a lot of fics.

    As you yourself mentioned it was the 'typical argument.' I just used that for that scene. However, later, when Snape and Harry have a bit of a bonding session, we do get to see Snape apologize for his behavior. It's just a little bit later in the fic. Again, thank you very much for the review.

Title: Awkward Homecoming 24 Jan 2011 8:44 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe!

    I love the graveyard scene, Lan!

    Wonderful! Absolutely beautiful!

    LOL I"m sure it made all the Lily fans very happy, too.

    Author's Response: Thanks, DA. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Title: Awkward Homecoming 23 Jan 2011 8:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. Hehe. oh boy. What a situation. I don't think that Snape would trust himself! LOL! And Harry! Wow, what a terrible fate, having to live with his potions master and have him interested in his mother. I bet that the Weasley children are moaning in sympathetic horror! Awesome.

    Author's Response: I agree with you. I'm pretty sure he doesn't either. :D Thanks for the review.
Title: Awkward Homecoming 23 Jan 2011 8:00 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay...So I switched to reviewing on P&S rater than ff.net. :D

    I so love it Lan!

    Oh! I love the bookshelf! hehehe...do I detect forshadowing?...hmmm...I wonder... LOL

    Amazing Lan! Thank you!

    Author's Response: Foreshadowing? Now, why would you think that, DA? :D Thanks for the review.

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