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Title: Promise of a Lifetime 23 Jan 2011 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Meegie09 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw that was so sweet! I loved seeing Severus so happy :)
    And I'm a huge fan of Kutless. I went to see them in concert with the Newsboys, and am waiting for Winter Jam to get close to my area to see them both again

    Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
Title: Promise of a Lifetime 23 Jan 2011 9:04 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    "About my father being a bastard on parole? No, Mr. Potter, I don't want to speak about that least of all to my student."

    hehehe...that made me giggle... :D

    I love the awkwardness between SNape and Harry in the basement! Very nice Lan! OH! And I've very happy Lily is coming to live with Snape at Hogwarts! :D

    Thank you so much Lan! REally, I couldn't have asked for a better story. I absolutely love it!

    *hugs her soul sister*

    Author's Response: You're welcome, DA. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just felt that it'd be awkward to leave her all by herself there for the term so I had to keep the family united. Glad you liked it.
Title: Flight of the Bastard 23 Jan 2011 8:36 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear...poor Snape!

    OMG I love Tobias! I loved the way he scared Harry! I love he talked to Lily! I love how he picked the lock! Amazing! I loved it! Wonderful Lan!

    And Lily was absolutly beautiful when dealing with Tobias!

    Excellent Lan! Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it.
Title: Promise of a Lifetime 23 Jan 2011 8:30 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, cute. I would have liked if the story had been focused on Snape and Harry a bit more. Okay, a lot more. Lily doesn't seem like a real character to me. She's.... fluffy. There didn't seem to be much depth to her. However, there would be tons of depth between Snape and Harry. More tangible emotions. It seemed as if their relationship was off to the side and we didn't get to fully see it develop.

    I really did like the idea, and there are a lot of really great things that were explored, like Lily and Harry moving in with Snape, Harry's hatred over everything. Snape trying to be a nicer person. Changing because Lily is around. Harry running away... Loved all those things. I guess I just wanted more angst and drama. :)

    I thought that Snape and Harry's dialogue and speak patterns were done very well. They seemed in character. I enjoyed reading about their characters and relationship. Just wish that there were more! :)

    Author's Response:

    I admit it. I can't write a nice Lily, Jan. That was my best attempt, and she came out fluffy. I think the main reason why we didn't see everything (like Snape and Harry working on fixing the house, bonding and all that) is because I somewhat rushed this story. However, I had thought that I had a good balance of all three of them. *hangs head* I guess not. Thanks for the review.

Title: He's Not So Bad After All 23 Jan 2011 8:24 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe!!! Harry got a birthday party from Snape...sorta... :D

    Very nice Lan! I even liked Ron in this! lol! Him impersonating Harry made me laugh!

    I love how you had Snape and Harry remodleing Spinners End! Nice touch!

    Excellent Lan! Thank you!

    Author's Response: The boys needed some bonding time. :D I just thought Ron needed some love in the fic, too. :D Glad you like it. :D
Title: Flight of the Bastard 23 Jan 2011 8:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. This was a great new thing to bring into it. Lots of stuff to explore. And maybe this will help Harry see Severus more of the person who he really is.

    Author's Response: Jan, I have a feeling you're going to be disappointed. It's the only time we see poor Tobias. Lily's scared him off. But you're right. It will help Harry and Severus. :D Thanks for the review. :D
Title: He's Not So Bad After All 23 Jan 2011 8:18 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, I like the development a lot. I'm a little sad that we didn't get to learn about Harry's injuries from his running away experience. I was hoping for a healing scene this chapter. :( Good thing Harry has good friends. Snape is being decent too.

    Author's Response: Sorry, Jan. My original did have Harry's injuries, but I took it out since we usually see Snape healing Harry anyway. I just figured that the reader could come up with a cute scene of that without me writing it. Thanks for the review. :D
Title: Coming to a Head 23 Jan 2011 8:15 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    However, Harry's thoughts were so dark that he failed to realize that he was walking towards the wrong bookshelf. Wham!

    LOL...Poor Harry!...ROTFL

    Awe! That was sweet! I love Snape! Rather a redundant statement huh? :D

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D Thanks for the review.
Title: Coming to a Head 23 Jan 2011 8:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it. love it. Great scene. And it is interesting that Snape has more insight into Harry than lily does. It makes sense though, he has been around children Harry's age for the past 12 years. Lily has not, probably doesn't have any experience. I love the development of this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Title: Awkward Homecoming 23 Jan 2011 8:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. Hehe. oh boy. What a situation. I don't think that Snape would trust himself! LOL! And Harry! Wow, what a terrible fate, having to live with his potions master and have him interested in his mother. I bet that the Weasley children are moaning in sympathetic horror! Awesome.

    Author's Response: I agree with you. I'm pretty sure he doesn't either. :D Thanks for the review.

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