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Reviews For Promise of a Lifetime
And I'm a huge fan of Kutless. I went to see them in concert with the Newsboys, and am waiting for Winter Jam to get close to my area to see them both again Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
hehehe...that made me giggle... :D I love the awkwardness between SNape and Harry in the basement! Very nice Lan! OH! And I've very happy Lily is coming to live with Snape at Hogwarts! :D Thank you so much Lan! REally, I couldn't have asked for a better story. I absolutely love it! *hugs her soul sister* Author's Response: You're welcome, DA. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just felt that it'd be awkward to leave her all by herself there for the term so I had to keep the family united. Glad you liked it.
OMG I love Tobias! I loved the way he scared Harry! I love he talked to Lily! I love how he picked the lock! Amazing! I loved it! Wonderful Lan! And Lily was absolutly beautiful when dealing with Tobias! Excellent Lan! Thank you! Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you like it.
I really did like the idea, and there are a lot of really great things that were explored, like Lily and Harry moving in with Snape, Harry's hatred over everything. Snape trying to be a nicer person. Changing because Lily is around. Harry running away... Loved all those things. I guess I just wanted more angst and drama. :) I thought that Snape and Harry's dialogue and speak patterns were done very well. They seemed in character. I enjoyed reading about their characters and relationship. Just wish that there were more! :) Author's Response: I admit it. I can't write a nice Lily, Jan. That was my best attempt, and she came out fluffy. I think the main reason why we didn't see everything (like Snape and Harry working on fixing the house, bonding and all that) is because I somewhat rushed this story. However, I had thought that I had a good balance of all three of them. *hangs head* I guess not. Thanks for the review.
Very nice Lan! I even liked Ron in this! lol! Him impersonating Harry made me laugh! I love how you had Snape and Harry remodleing Spinners End! Nice touch! Excellent Lan! Thank you! Author's Response: The boys needed some bonding time. :D I just thought Ron needed some love in the fic, too. :D Glad you like it. :D
Author's Response: Jan, I have a feeling you're going to be disappointed. It's the only time we see poor Tobias. Lily's scared him off. But you're right. It will help Harry and Severus. :D Thanks for the review. :D
Author's Response: Sorry, Jan. My original did have Harry's injuries, but I took it out since we usually see Snape healing Harry anyway. I just figured that the reader could come up with a cute scene of that without me writing it. Thanks for the review. :D
LOL...Poor Harry!...ROTFL Awe! That was sweet! I love Snape! Rather a redundant statement huh? :D Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it. :D Thanks for the review.
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Author's Response: I agree with you. I'm pretty sure he doesn't either. :D Thanks for the review. |
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