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Reviews For Promise of a Lifetime
I so love it Lan! Oh! I love the bookshelf! hehehe...do I detect forshadowing?...hmmm...I wonder... LOL Amazing Lan! Thank you! Author's Response: Foreshadowing? Now, why would you think that, DA? :D Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Yep, he was talking to Sinistra. :D I had to include her. *hangs head* All right, so I thought I made that clear, but what happened was Harry had showed up before class started, not too early mind you, and was reading Snape's letter. While he was doing that, the class was filtering in at the time, but Harry was so focused on reading Snape's parchment followed by being angry at him that he didn't realize it. Snape walked in to start class, caught Harry, so then Harry sat down, and Snape then started their potions class. Of course, throughout the remainder of Potions, Harry is seething at Snape for writing his mother. That was what I was trying to say in a few words. Thanks for the review. :D
Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Author's Response: You'll see more later about her being upset about missing Harry's life. I think mostly, though, she's just grateful to be alive and with her son. Yes, she does love James and likely misses him. I just didn't include too much of that in this fic. As it goes on, though, you should see Lily questioning to herself what had happened between everyone she knew since she's been dead. Another possible reason she might be not as upset as someone would be is that it hasn't necessarily hit her yet. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: That was DA's scene. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jan. I'm glad you're enjoying it. |
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