I've read his story befire on another site. Excellent, excellent story. One of my favourites.
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| 21 Dec 2015 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent start thank you
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| 27 Oct 2015 8:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting thank you
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| 12 Aug 2014 3:09 am
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| Reviewer: Jz (Anonymous)
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I should add that your story deserves a thousand more reviews. The best story I've read in a long while... Way too few reviews!
I love the way you portray dreamscapes, as well as the manner you weave them into the waking world that is seamless without being disorienting. That can be quite the trick, sometimes, but you certainly seem to have mastered it.
This chapter is a great start--I'm looking forward to the reading through the rest of the tale.
Wow, this is so unlike anything I've ever read before. I definitely wanna keep going, but first I wanna go back and read the prologue.
Good job! I'm intrigued!
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| 30 Jan 2011 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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oh man what a place to leave it. I really didn't think toad face could have had him expelled until the end as she would have to have a really good explanation on why she was kicking him out.
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| 30 Jan 2011 4:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Nakago (Anonymous)
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I'm very grateful you placed this story here as well - I could read it thanks to that. On ff.net it's definitely harder to find anything worth reading that here. And this fanfiction surely is worth reading. You have my gratitude.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Jan 2011 3:14 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Very interesting start. The dream sequence at the beginning was excellent - far more like real dreams than most fictional dreams.
This story have big potential, I'm really looking forward for more!
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