| Title: Chapter 2
| 21 Dec 2015 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good scenes with ice mix of old and new!
I'm so sure you wrote this to plague me. What's the connection between Tim and Snape? I mean, they have to HAVE some sort of connection seeing as how Tim sounded so much like Snape!!! On the other hand, Dudley is so...friendly. It's a bit weird, imagining Dudley as someone so.. genial. I can't help but notice how Tim is a bit similar to Harry (and probably Snape) when he's (they're) young. All in all, excellent work, and update!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 31 Jan 2011 3:42 am
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Wonderful beginning to a story that explores the post-Hogwarts life of some of our favorite alumni. It not only fits in with canon but is credible without stretching the imagination too far. I am curious about Snape's connection is to young Tim (I am sure you put the bezoar question in just to make us think of the Snape/Tim connection. It worked.) and would have loved to see Tim's placement into the Potter's home. Looking forwarded to the next chapter(s).
Oh, I think I have a theory about Tim... can't wait to see if I'm right!
Another very good chapter; I *like* how you write Dudley! It makes so much sense that he'd change his views on "freaks" after his parents declared him one.
Looking forward to more!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know that really doesn't count as a review and it's really unhelpful, but MORE!!!!!!!! I need more. I love your Dudley and Elenor and I adore Tim! I just want to pick him up and cuddle him. I can't wait to see how you bring Snape into this more. Please continue, and update soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Jan 2011 8:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous)
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I'm liking this. I always did hope that Dudley would grow up to be not such a jerk. Most interested to see where this story will go.
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