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Reviews For Snape's Memories
Title: Chapter 23 10 Nov 2012 5:40 pm
Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Two capatal letters in Our.

    OUr guess is

    PS. I really like your world-building and writing.
Title: Chapter 23 10 Nov 2012 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think in the following sentence "shouted Ernie at her" is a little jarring. I think "Ernie shouted at her" flows better.


    "Maybe, you're supposed to see that your patient actually gets to where he's supposed to go!" shouted Ernie at her,
Title: Chapter 22 10 Nov 2012 5:28 pm
Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The "to take him" has been repeated twice in the following sentence.


    Maybe he could pay some poor jonesing junkie to take him to take him somewhere.
Title: Chapter 29 06 Sep 2012 6:43 am
Reviewer: katyushinka (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I can't believe I've never read this story before. It's amazing. I stayed up late to finish reading it so I can't really put a lot of coherent sentences together, but I just wanted to tell you how much I loved it :)
Title: Chapter 29 05 Sep 2012 7:24 pm
Reviewer: Chucky (Signed) [Report This]
    G*ddamn, I must be unbalanced or something because your story made me cry more than once. I know it was probably meant to be heartwarming, but I found it very sad (though it did have positive elements). I must be the 'glass half-empty' type, because most of the time I thought about how much Snape's life was really wasted (even though he was a bastard more often then not) and about all the lost chances and wasted lives. And that was despite the fact that I did catch your drift about who Tim was...

    It was a good story, though. Maybe I'm just in a very peculiar mood.
Title: Chapter 17 14 Mar 2012 3:02 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter ending! I love the idea of the Vernon and Petunia Dursley Scholarship for Wizarding Youth.
Title: Chapter 8 13 Mar 2012 6:27 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, heck. This story is so good that I just want to keep on reading but if I do, I'll never get up for work in time tomorrow. Thanks for a great read, Paganaidd.
Title: Chapter 29 03 Mar 2012 4:34 pm
Reviewer: PersianPianist (Signed) [Report This]
    brilliant and well written.
Title: Chapter 29 08 Jan 2012 4:04 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoooo! This was a fantastic story! I loved the way you included adult Dudley and let us see their childhood situation from his point of view. And the ACTION and SUSPENSE kept me going chapter after chapter (which kinda explains why I didn't review earlier chaps-- I just HAD to keep reading!), especially the St. Mungo's/abduction/Kreacher-to-the-rescue/Harry's Avada Kedavra (now THAT was a shock!)/Tim finally feels like he has a real family scenes. Wow! And the dreams Harry had-- am I correct in thinking that it all means that Snape has been reincarnated to give him a second chance at having a better life? Or am I off track? At any rate, I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    You are absolutely on track.

     I am currently writing a sequel, "Severus' Dreams". 

Title: Chapter 29 07 Jan 2012 2:52 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    It was so good to re-read this story today. I'd read "Severus' Dreams" and found that I just HAD to come back to this tale.

    It is so heart-warming, and I still love to see Harry and Ginny as the parents of teenagers, and as foster parents. I love how Dudley and Harry are coming to a real friendship, and I thoroughly enjoy how you've drawn out the next generation.

    From the details of daily life at Grimmaud Place, to the social and legal background of the Wizarding world and the places it intersects with the Muggle world, I felt totally immersed from the first paragraph to the last word.

    I will continue to recommend this story to my friends, and you can be sure that I'll be back to re-read it a lot in the future.

    Well done!

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