That was a satisfying end to your story! Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Interesting! I wonder what Black knew. Nicely suspenseful chapter.
| Title: Chapter 6: A Famous Person
| 29 Jun 2022 12:20 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the wand that chose Harry - very creative. It will be interesting to see how wielding it will change the course of events.
| Title: Chapter 5: Of Magic and Truth
| 29 Jun 2022 12:15 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great chapter. I’m curious whether Dumbledore will factor into this story.
| Title: Chapter 4: Nightmares and Bedtime Stories
| 29 Jun 2022 12:08 am
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Lovely chapter. I liked the way that Severus handled Harry,
I love how you’ve made what’s normal seem heavenly to Harry.
| Title: Chapter 2: Unspeakable Discovery
| 28 Jun 2022 11:38 pm
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The time spell is very cool. I really like that Severus is an Unspeakable.
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 28 Jun 2022 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great start to the story! I really like the atypical characterization of Tobias and his (and Severus’s) backstory.
Thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end! Loved your take on an AU fic, and with so many deviations from canon, I had to admit I was wary at first, but then I got caught up in the story, and WOW! You are SNAPEGIRL!!! I think my favorite aspect by far was Snape's patience in helping Harry overcome his fears and uncertainties, one by one. You didn't rush or gloss over anything, and you let us see Harry emerge into the person he should've been all along, by the time he had to testify in front of the Wizengemut. Well done! 😊
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