| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 28 Jun 2022 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great start to the story! I really like the atypical characterization of Tobias and his (and Severus’s) backstory.
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 14 Aug 2015 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A wonderful start to the story! I have a feeling I have read it but have forgotten it so I'll read and review as if it was new!
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 26 Sep 2014 7:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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The game is afoot. Track down Tuney and chop off her head.
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 16 Feb 2011 10:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start to this story thank you so much
oooh... I love the interesting take on this, especially with Severus working in MOM and being a Seer. Very nice.
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 15 Feb 2011 10:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh wow! Great start Snapegirl.
Dumbledore was blown to bits? Yikes!
I hope that Severus can track down Harry, and give the Dursleys what they deserve!
SQWEEEE! I love it so far, Snapegirl! When I saw my alert that you posted a new fic, and it turned out to be my fic exchange, I squeeled so loud, I'm sure china heard it!lol.
Thou I'm not a huge Tobias fan, the way you portray him here is wonderful. Switching his and sev's mom's treatment towards Sev is something you rarly see in fics.
I love how you made sev an Unspeakable! It is something I could See Sev doing, if he didn't work with potions, given his vast knowlage of the dark arts, potions, and even Occlememcy.
Of to read chapter two!
P.S.~ have I told you I love this yet? Lol
I noticed something that is a quick and easy fix...it should be Petunia Dursley nee Evans' the nee is french for 'born' so the maiden name comes second.
But I'm liking the story :D
Very intriguing. I love it. Can't wait to see how it goes. :D
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 15 Feb 2011 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Facinating premise; I've always thought that, had Snape's life taken another path, he'd have been an unspeakable and the addition of being a seer is very interesting and the way in which you have portrayed it's manifestation is highly believable. I like the interaction between Severus and Tobias, not to mention their backstory, and the way in which you've interwoven canon events (Dumbledore's ill-judged horcrux meddling) is intreguing. Looking forward to more.
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