I love how you’ve made what’s normal seem heavenly to Harry.
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 14 Aug 2015 5:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love Tobias! A lovely chapter all warm and fluffy like the towels!
Poor little Harry. I liked the bit about the "manly scent."
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 16 Feb 2011 10:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the house and Severus and Tobias as characters and I'm so pleased there is no Dumbledore to mess up Harry's life
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 16 Feb 2011 2:04 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, that was so sweet!
Poor Harry is just not used to being taken care of properly, is he?
I can just imagine how sweet and adorable looking Harry is. Very cute.
Good story Snapegirl!
Awe... Severus is handling Harry very well. *onto the next chapter*
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 15 Feb 2011 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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This chapter felt a bit prickly at first, with Harry feeling afraid and denying his magic, but it ended up wonderfully warm and fuzzy! :-)
Poor Harry. Sev's not the only one who wishes to go homicidal on the Dursleys. Excellent chapter.
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 15 Feb 2011 5:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; the interplay between Harry, Severus and Tobias was really well written and realistic; you've softened Severus but he's still recognisable, just seems to have lived a slightly different life and developed accordingly. The detail about the floor cleaner was deliciously horrible and Harry's behaviour overall felt very authentic.
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