My heart is pounding hard! Great cliffe, evil, evil cliffe, but great nonetheless. This ending deserves a 20 rating, but, alas, 10 is the highest possible, sorry.
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 8: Cover Up
| 16 Feb 2011 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Whoa! Quite an exciting end to the chapter! Excellent use of Accio! And clever of Harry to save the satchel with the Will & memory vial before fleeing into the Floo. And the Wand-- if the Prophet gets ahold of THAT story... Terrific chapter through and through!
Run Harry. Run!
I hope that Snape can get out of this and that he can get custody of Harry. That bastard Malfoy is a rat!
Good chappie. Onto the next.
Wow. There's a twist. Very nice.
I loved the hairbrush scene; giving Harry the light pats was much better than simply refusing to beat him as, in Harry's mind it allowed the other shoe to drop and showed him that he had no need to fear. Very interesting use of the regression potion in proving Sirus' innocence. The scene at the end was a nice twist; very interested in seeing how this will play out. One way or another, I feel Severus and Tobias will have their revenge on GM
Oh Intense. I knew something was up. Awesome chapter.
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