Oh wow! Intense. Runs to next chapter.
Very intriguing. I love it. Can't wait to see how it goes. :D
| Title: Chapter 3: First Talks
| 15 Feb 2011 5:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Great chapter; the interplay between Harry, Severus and Tobias was really well written and realistic; you've softened Severus but he's still recognisable, just seems to have lived a slightly different life and developed accordingly. The detail about the floor cleaner was deliciously horrible and Harry's behaviour overall felt very authentic.
| Title: Chapter 2: Unspeakable Discovery
| 15 Feb 2011 5:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Wow, what a wonderfully twisty chapter; I thought that Harry might be in danger, given the returned letter, but this chapter came as a surprise, nevertheless. At first I thought the murder-suicide was a bit OOC for VD but then it turned out to be Death-eaters, which seemed much more likely and the Dursleys did remain in character after all. I do wonder, though, why the protection failed on Privet Drive; was it because the Dursleys had broken their side of the bargain by staving him so severely? Very interesting details about the nature of magic and I really like your descriptions, which are very vivid.
| Title: Chapter 1: Unspeakable Vision
| 15 Feb 2011 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Facinating premise; I've always thought that, had Snape's life taken another path, he'd have been an unspeakable and the addition of being a seer is very interesting and the way in which you have portrayed it's manifestation is highly believable. I like the interaction between Severus and Tobias, not to mention their backstory, and the way in which you've interwoven canon events (Dumbledore's ill-judged horcrux meddling) is intreguing. Looking forward to more.
............How is it that this has no reviews.........?
I LOVE IT!! It /is/ a very different Severus. i can't wait to read what you've done with them. I like your Tobias!!!
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