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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Unspeakable
I hope that Snape can get out of this and that he can get custody of Harry. That bastard Malfoy is a rat! Good chappie. Onto the next.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm really glad!
Just wanted to let you know, I went back to chapter 8 and put in an extra conversation between Snape and Harry and Harry and Toby because another reviewer asked what about them discussing James to Harry? So I added a little more to the story and also added a small note about a cracker crumb chicken recipe mentioned in the chapter as well. If you'd like it, PM me.
He must be feeling comfortable with Sev now, and that is why he gave Sev attitude. I hope that things work out for Harry and that Severus can make him feel safe and secure. Good chappie SG. Onto the next.
It must be hard being a seer like that. Feeling helpless to control everything. Great chappie. On to the next. |
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