Thank you so much for writing this! It was a very touching story, made me cry lol. I've never thought of Severus being anything but a predatory animal, so an elegant and beautiful swan was a great twist! Well done!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 01 Aug 2011 5:58 pm
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Reviewer: haze (Anonymous)
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That story is perhaps one of the most beautiful ones I've ever read. It was just...amazing...made me shed tears. Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 29 Jul 2011 7:43 am
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Reviewer: Kore (Anonymous)
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I cried.
Yep, that was definitely touching. The funeral caught me completely off guard.
This is really good and I like it. It made me tear up actually. Peace! CheyRain
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 04 Jun 2011 7:01 pm
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Reviewer: Silynara (Anonymous)
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While I hate Fanfiction stories were 'Severus' dies in accordince with the book, I must say I like this story for 'Severus'' form. A Black Swan Severus Snape a beautiful picture.
You almost made me cry! (Again! Okay, you actually did. It seems you are able to do that everytime you have Sev dead and Harry learning more about him.) Although I saw it coming, I was so happy that Sev was the swan... and he tried to fight to keep Harry safe.
Which is why I want to ask, do you think you will ever write a story where Harry dies and we get to see some interaction between the great black swan and 'his ugly duckling?' Because I would love to see (read) Sirus' reaction! Also I'd love to see how Harry reacts to the man knowing what he knows now and that Sev tried so many times to save him.
If not, I'll live and dream what my own ending. (Like Harry punching Sirus in the nose when he calls him Snivillus!) Great job, love the story!!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 06 Apr 2011 8:08 am
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Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous)
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I don't cry. I really don't. I'm having an allergy problem that's why my nose is sniffly, my throat is clogged up and my eyes are all wet. Really.
Lovely story. Sad and sweet and although I like chara death of Snape in the fewest case you did a good job. Your Melfis.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 10 Mar 2011 3:47 am
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Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous)
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Ha ha! I laughed when I read the prompts of the challenge in the Chapter End Notes and your spin to them.
Once again, touching. Love the way it ends in particular - the last paragraph of the Ugly Duckling :)
As always, extremely well written.
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