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Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 18 Feb 2011 3:33 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    You have had me in tears. Great story at least Harry now knows the entire story of Severus and Shadow. Thank you for a wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 18 Feb 2011 2:11 am
Reviewer: Missyann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was really a beautiful story. I can't see through my glasses anymore because of my tears.

    Missyann

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it ^^
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 18 Feb 2011 1:38 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful story, Morgana! I wish that Harry and Severus could have reconciled in life, but it was a perfect bittersweet ending. I love Severus as a black swan...very original too! I only wish there were more!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^: although the story is very sad, I think the tragedy does rather suit the 'fairytale' theme. I'm glad you liked my idea for Severus' animagus form.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 18 Feb 2011 12:18 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    That is SOOOOOO wonderful! Well, tragic that Snape died before he could resolve things with Harry, but wonderful that Harry found out the truth at last. (Makes me wonder HOW Snape would have admitted it... "By the way, Potter, I am a swan..." Nahhhh!!! LOVED this story to the very hilt! Thanks for a wonderful tale!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I think, if Severus had the chance, he'd probably attempt to make amends over his behaviour first then, when the time felt right, he might confide in Harry. (Or, possibly, take the cowards way out and just leave his pensieve lying around lol!)
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww! I just loved this! You made me cry. First because poor, little Harry is so mistreated and unhappy. Then because Snape died and he never did get to talk to Harry. I was hoping he would.

    Very beautifully written and well done. Great job. :D

    Author's Response: Thanks. I know, I felt really mean denying Harry and Severus their 'happy ever after' but this felt rather more realistic and, of course, it also tied in with the canon, thereby avoiding loose ends. I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely story. It made me cry. Very orginial.

    Author's Response: Thank you; I've seen plenty of stories where Harry makes friends with Snape in animagus form but never one where Harry doesn't discover that Snape is (insert animal's name) until it's too late. I thought that it might be interesting to examine this but, of course, that makes for a sad story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 9:51 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH this was sad I loved this! you made me cry! *S* Very nice very nice indeed....

    Author's Response: Thanks: I'm glad you liked it ^^
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 8:32 am
Reviewer: Vulpixer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't often write reviews, but this story was so so moving I just had to let you know. So sweet and tender... So heartbreaking... Damn you Albus!!! *shakes fist at his portrait* You could tell just how much it killed Sev to have to leave his little Harry and then knowing he had to pretend to hate him.. *sniffles* I can count the times a fic has made me cry on on hand, and I am so honored to add this one to those few others. This one is fic I won't soon be forgetting, and as I inhale fics like food that is saying something. I bow to you and your masterpiece. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you: it always means a lot to writers when their reader's review ^^ Yes, Severus would have been devestated to leave Harry in his misery, let alone actively causing the child distress; I think their tragedy is a necessary foil for the fluffier aspects of the story and, of course, it leaves almost all the canon events unaltered. As for Albus, I think that the 'greater good', like his anti-slytherin bias, is a powerful force behind his decision-making; by remaining a DE, Severus would be in a position to save lives, protect students and, ultimately, bring down Voldemort and, if Severus and Harry's happiness had to be sacrificed, so be it. We see Dumbledore making similar decisions in the canon and I feel that it would be in character for him to clinically decide that dozens of lives were worth more than two people's happiness :(

    I'm really glad that you enjoyed this fic and thank you for your kind compliments; I really enjoyed writing this little story (even though the sad parts made me choke up too) and I'm honoured that you rate it so highly ^^

Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 6:20 am
Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was s fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this.

    Author's Response: Thank you ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 6:11 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was beautiful. yay.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^

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