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Title: Chapter 1: Under Your Wing 17 Feb 2011 4:23 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a lovely story. I suspect that Mr. Nimrod is a little more than he stated though. I'm off to the next chapter, eagerly awaiting the resolution.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. Yes, Amroth Nimrod is certainly more than he seems ;)
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 3:54 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *brushes tears from her eyes*

    That was amazing Morgana! Absolutely beautiful! I loved the book 'Snape' gave Harry and the connection it drew to snape and LIly.

    I will admit...I was hoping Von Poseihudor would be SNape. But at the same time I knew he simpily couldn't be. *Sighs* Odd right? lol

    Wonderfully beautiful, Gana!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I thought that the book was a very 'Snape' touch; I can imagine him being an artist and, although I'm not quite sure why, I think he'd be a fan of fairytales (perhaps because his best friend was a girl; princesses and knights' is a popular game for mixed-gender groups of kids lol!) Anyhow, I thought it would be appropriate gift for a child as well as carrying a hidden meaning which would only become clear when Harry was 'in the know' (i.e. that Snape was Amroth and that, although he couldn't declare so at the time, he had attempted to say a proper goodbye to Harry.)

    I can see Severus admiring Von Poseihudor (whose surname means 'waterlord'), which is why he copied some of his features while posing as Amroth. However, I did want this story to be more of an elaboration on the canon rather than wholly AU, so Severus had to die as he did in DH. However, he did let Harry know that his Shadow never ceased to look out for him or stopped loving him.  

Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 3:48 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    awww. this had me all teary eyed the whole way thru. i love it!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, despite the tragedy
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 2:46 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I had tears in my eye at the end of this story. Beautifully done.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^; I'm glad you liked it, despite the sad ending.
Title: Chapter 1: Under Your Wing 17 Feb 2011 2:04 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwww...... I want a black swan now!

    I bet 100 house pionts that shadow is really Snapes Animagnus form!

    Author's Response: Thank's for the review. Yes, black swans are really cute; we have a really friendly pair here and, whenever I walk past the estuary, they waddle up to see me, squeaking happily and swishing their black tails ^^. Why on earth would you think that elegant, poised Shadow, with his oily black feathers and intelligent, penetrating, dark eyes is Snape?!
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 12:31 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn - I wasn't expecting that! It always makes me sad when Snape is killed off, but it was nice that he left Harry the gift. And I'm going to believe that Dumbledore met a suitably sticky end.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. While there are a couple of 'alternate universe' events in this story, Harry's life, overall, is supposed to be canon, thus Snape and Dumbledore die as they do in HBP/DH. I did this because I felt that, had Harry been given a 'happy ever after', the story wouldn't have the gritty edge Bil seems to enjoy. Also, I feel that this way, the 'might have beens' make the fluff poignant rather than soppy.

Title: Chapter 1: Under Your Wing 17 Feb 2011 12:17 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Superb. You got all the little background details of Harry's life so right, and its easy to imagine him singing the songs he's learnt at school to entertain himself. I'm not surprised that Shadow was preferred over Sooty, assuming the swan is Snape in disguise!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^ I think 'Shadow' would have been rather miffed to say the least at being associated with a funny, black and orange, magic-casting bear-puppet: amongst other things, Sooty is mute!

Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 12:10 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely story!!! I learned something new, too - I had no idea that Canada Geese has established themselves a bit in Europe too!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Yup, we have a healthy brood of canada geese cohabiting with our white and black swans where I live; I've always loved watching the waterbirds and it was fun to involve them in a story.
Title: Chapter 2: Swansong 17 Feb 2011 12:10 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, you made me cry. Thank you so much for your story, this was wonderful.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^, I'm glad you liked it (even though it made you cry)
Title: Chapter 1: Under Your Wing 16 Feb 2011 11:57 pm
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love this. What a great little story. Harry and his swan. This story just makes me want to give Harry a big hug and hex the Dursleys.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review; yes, given Harry's interaction with the boa, I thought he'd be gorgeously cute with a long term pet. You're not the only one who wants to hex the Dursleys ;)

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