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Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 9:45 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I enjoyed Snape's POV as he attempted to deal with the boys. First thought was that the last paragraph was a bit clipped, but on reflection it said all it needed to.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Rosina. im glad you liked it.
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 9:38 pm
Reviewer: MiuBlaze (Signed) [Report This]
    *fangirl scream* I LOVE THIS! *gives story a hug and a kiss and calls it George* It was pretty good, for your first ever Harry/Snape/Draco fic.

    One thing, though. In the story, I'd have liked to seen when Draco first found out and Harry's reaction.

    Other than that, It was really, really great! Is there going to be a sequel?

    Author's Response: *blushes* im glad you liked it. i was worried that it wasnt what you wanted.  as to a sequel, ill have to pester my muse and see what she says.
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story; I really liked how you slowly revealed the situation behind Harry and Draco staying with Severus and the boys' interaction over The Secret, which felt very believable. One question, though; did one nightmare occur the night before Draco and Harry's final arguement or had there been a series of nightmares? If it's the latter, Draco would probably have given some indication he was 'in the know', e.g. by suddenly being suspiciously nice to Harry, pitying looks, etc.
    That minor detail aside, this was a clever, very well executed story; I especially loved your portrayal of Snape and his thought processes- a mixture of exasperation, arrogance and sarcasm suits him ^^

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing.  
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 11:38 am
Reviewer: Nakago (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't like it very much. The beginning was OK, middle part as well, but at the end... It's like a sketch not full story. And because this good beginning (not excellent but good) and middle part ending disappointed me. It's like there wasn't end at all. And I don't like it.

    Author's Response: i'm glad you didn't like it!  thanks for reading and reviewing a fic you didn't really like!
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 10:38 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OOOO very very good love the imagery I got when I read this! Will there be a sequil?

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing.  im not sure if i will continue this or not.  It's a possiblity.
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 8:27 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked it but I felt like the ending was rushed and I would have liked to have heard the conversation rather than a summary of it. Otherwise good job. I loved the Harry/Draco interaction.

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 7:05 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story!

    Author's Response: thanks for reading and Reviewing Moira.
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 6:29 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *Applauds*

    Amazing Wid!

    Feel free to pester me anytime! :D

    I love the ending. The half cliffy and yet half happy ending and half sad ending...lol...that's a lot of halves. :D Oh, and Snape little the little snots suffer in timeout while he cooked...lol...very evil! I love it!

    Excellent Wid!

    Author's Response: *Hugs DoA*  Thanks hon!
Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 6:28 am
Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved the ending paragraph. Very moving.

    Author's Response:

    thanks Roma, Im glad you liked it.

Title: When Glass Houses Shatter 19 Feb 2011 6:22 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww Awesome! *cuddles Harry and Draco* I hope you know, I want more...just an fyi. :D

    Author's Response:

    lol, of course you do Star! Ill write more to this if you write that Snape doing the bunny hop fic! lol thanks for reading and Reviewing

     


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