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Title: Chapter 2 28 May 2012 4:44 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sinistra. Her appearance is brief, but enough to give a nice snapshot of who she is. The descriptions of the scene in the astronomy tower are lovely. And I rather enjoyed the last line of this. It gave a nice picture.
Title: Chapter 2 21 Feb 2011 4:22 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. I really like your depiction of the three teachers, though it's nothing short of a tragedy that Harry doesn't realise the value of Prof. Kettleburn- people who have studied animal behaviour that intensely and who are willing to share their knowledge are invaluable for any duellist lol! Sinistra's love of poetry is a good 'hook' to explain her relationship with Snape (who must love poetry) and I really liked the extra dimention you gave Madam Pince. Great work!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    Proffesor Kettleburn was by far my favorite character to write. And, I agree Harry really should have paid more attenion to him. He could learn alot. :D

    Thanks Gana!

Title: Chapter 2 21 Feb 2011 4:32 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    hehehe... I love Kettleburn! If It was me, id would of turned tail and ran! lol

    And Sinistra! LOVE HER! And Pince! LOL her sarcasim could rival Snape's! lol

    Author's Response:

    Kettleburn is a bit creepy isn't he? LOL

    Yes, Pince, she was actually the person I had the most trouble writing.

    Thanks Wid! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much second time! :D

Title: Chapter 2 20 Feb 2011 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    lol... oh, boys, I so love you. lol. Awesome, DA. Three minor characters that we hardly ever see. :D Love the little tidbit of knowledge and the very interesting discovery of Muggle authors. :D Though, perhaps it's me, but do I sense a little strife between Sinistra and Pince? lol. Wonderful chapter. *onto next*

    Author's Response:

    Three characters? Oh! That's right...the others are in the next chapter. :D I hope that met your minor character quota. :P

    I tried to explain Xanadu without being overly informative...I really hope it worked. :D And the way I see it. A library is a place to gain all sorts of knowlege, so even a wizarding library would have some books by muggles. Besides, they Muggle Studies students might need to use them. :D

    Sinistra? Pince? Strife? I have no idea what you're talking about.... *instert evil grin here*

     

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 2 20 Feb 2011 10:34 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the interaction between Draco and harry. Great Job :D

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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