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Title: Chapter 3 28 May 2012 4:45 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh. That conversation between Severus and Charity Burbage was hilarious. You had Severus pegged perfectly. I loved when Harry wondered if Charity was suicidal, the way she was laughing at Snape's response.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Feb 2011 4:29 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the conversation between Charity and Snape- I can imagine him letting off steam to a friend like that and someone with a 'counterweight' personality (i.e. who could see the other side of any given arguement) would, in giving him the opportunity to rant away his frustration, certainly have an attraction lol! Loved the Draco/Harry interaction; there's just enough tension to make it believable, while their shared traits (i.e. bravery, disregard for the rules, love of freedom) are obviously the basis for the grudging friendship. Looking forward to more

    Author's Response:

    I have to admit...the scene in the last movie made me fall madly in love with the Charity-Snape relationship. Alan Rickman did that scene so well as to take my breath away, so I had to play tribute to it.

    I'm glad their growing friendship was believable, it was probably the single hardest element in this story to balance. Well, for me anyway. LOL

    Thanks Gana!

Title: Chapter 3 21 Feb 2011 4:40 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    love the banter between Draco and Harry.

    ANd the way you showed a friendship between Burbage and Snape was wonderful! it was something that was totaly missing from canaon, esp. after the scene in DH, when she mentions their friendship.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Wid!

    I tried to make that scene subtly pay homage to the cannon scene, but may have gone overboard with the 'because we're friends' line. :D

Title: Chapter 3 20 Feb 2011 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    AWE!!!!! I'm so loving the boys. Their impromptu snowball fight was just cute. I love the way Snape gets their attention. Too cute. Then again, poor boys, yes, poor, poor boys. :D love it! *onto next*

    Author's Response:

    Hehehe...snowball fights... :D

    I briefly considered haveing one of them accidently launch a snowball at Snape...but figured he was mad enough as it was.

    I'm so so so glad you like it! Thanks Lan!

Title: Chapter 3 20 Feb 2011 10:37 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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