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Title: Chapter 4 15 Apr 2021 12:56 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story! And it prompted a nice reflection on the concept of Xanadu.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Apr 2014 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Abie (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! This is a beautiful, incredibly written story. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Apr 2014 6:13 am
Reviewer: Lili (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!
Title: Chapter 4 28 May 2012 4:48 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    My my, what a lovely story. It was quite unique, and was wonderfully written. I loved the snowball fight between Harry and Draco. It was an amusing moment, that quite honestly reminded me a lot of my friends when I was twelve. Everyone got a face-wash at some point after the big blizzard in my grade seven year! Anyway, thank you for the lovely story.
Title: Chapter 4 20 Mar 2011 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    this was such a different and unique story...i loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks you! :D
Title: Chapter 4 10 Mar 2011 8:17 am
Reviewer: Lia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So many oft-forgotten teachers in there. I loved the interactions between them and the boys, specially Professor Kettleburn's.
    I wanted to leave a review at the end of each chapter but was too carried away in the flow of the story.
    You are a great writer - I generally tend to skip over descriptions of scenery but you write them so beautifully with subtle imagery weaved into into it. Love the way you described Snape's Xanadu ... Wel, I am off to look for my own...

    Fantastic, as always!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! Kettleburn is a favorite of mine as well. lol. I had a bit of fun with Snape's Xanadu and a bit of help!

    Thank you!

Title: Chapter 4 26 Feb 2011 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the poem so love this! Great writing and enough angst to make it very interesting thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks!!
Title: Chapter 4 22 Feb 2011 5:54 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww that was wonderful DOA, GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!

    Author's Response: Thanks Aut!! :D
Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet; I loved Snape's Xanadu, very 'Wuthering Heights' ^^. Sinistra and Snape's conversation was very entertaining; I almost feel sorry for the poor man- he can terrify kids but is thoroughly browbeaten by a pair of strongminded witches lol! Oh, I also loved the Draco/Harry interaction over Snape's relationship-status; very in character and very funny (might even be a hint of Draco/Hermione there- their EI seems more on the same level lol!)

    Author's Response:

    LOL! Don't feel sorry for him, I'm sure he enjoys it. ;D

    Dramione all the way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They really are perfect for each other. :D

    Thanks Gana! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 5:03 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    BEAUTIFUL Doa! I love this story! the end, when Sev take the boys to his Xanadu had me in tears, both betaing it and as I read it again now. well Done!

    Author's Response:

    *Hands Wid a tissue* Don't cry!! :D

    Thanks Wid! *hugs* I'm glad you liked it!!


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