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Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 4:53 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You had me fooled! I was SURE that Snape would be pelted by at least one snowball before the end of the story! Hee! But seriously, I really enjoyed this all the way through. I think your portrayal of the 12-year-old mindset is pretty accurate! Interesting to see Professor Kettleburn-- now I'm itching to know about all these rumors concerning his various "losses"! Nice job!

    Author's Response:

    LOL Shadow!! I seriously considered having Snape hit with a snowball!!

    Kettleburn was my favoite to write! He was very entertaining...kinda like a Hagrid-Snape Hybrid. Scary right? LOL

    Thanks Shadow! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 1:21 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story - thank you.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 1:20 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww. So cute! yay.

    Author's Response: Thanks Star!
Title: Chapter 4 20 Feb 2011 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! "Snape seemed to be heating their lunch as quickly as possible, but Harry figured it would go faster if Snape stopped banging things around so much." LOL... you think, Harry? lol... nice line.

    LOL... awe...the boys are so adorable. Harry asking about Snape and Aura with Draco responding 'You're a moron' made me laugh. hehe... awe...

    Snape's Xanadu fits him perfectly, if that makes sense. And you were full of lovely descriptions/comparisions with it. Great job. :D

    Now, come on, boys. You have your plan, just impliment it now. :D lol

    Awe, DA. I love your story. You had me smiling throughout it and at times laughing like a happy and less crazy Bella. ;) So... does this mean I'll get a sequel since the boys (namely Harry) are plotting? lol :D

    Author's Response:

    But...but...LAN!! I like crazy Bella!! :D lol

    I'm really glad you like it Lan. That means a lot coming from my soul sister. :D (not to mention the person I wrote it for. :P )

    Anyway, I tried to make the Auroa/Snape relationship subtle, but still obvious at the same time. Does that even make sense? And don't ask why I wanted it that way. I just did.

    Thanks Lan!!

Title: Chapter 4 20 Feb 2011 10:41 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful story. Absolutely loved it :D

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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