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Title: Chapter 2 21 Feb 2011 4:32 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    hehehe... I love Kettleburn! If It was me, id would of turned tail and ran! lol

    And Sinistra! LOVE HER! And Pince! LOL her sarcasim could rival Snape's! lol

    Author's Response:

    Kettleburn is a bit creepy isn't he? LOL

    Yes, Pince, she was actually the person I had the most trouble writing.

    Thanks Wid! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much second time! :D

Title: Chapter 1 21 Feb 2011 4:29 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    love this! poor Harry. His fear of Snape, and waiting for the punishment he thinks he's gonna get, because of the treatment from his aunt and uncle is so sad. And i love your Snape! snot too fluffy and not to snarky!

    Author's Response: Thanks Wid! :D
Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 1:21 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely story - thank you.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 4 21 Feb 2011 1:20 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww. So cute! yay.

    Author's Response: Thanks Star!
Title: Chapter 4 20 Feb 2011 11:12 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! "Snape seemed to be heating their lunch as quickly as possible, but Harry figured it would go faster if Snape stopped banging things around so much." LOL... you think, Harry? lol... nice line.

    LOL... awe...the boys are so adorable. Harry asking about Snape and Aura with Draco responding 'You're a moron' made me laugh. hehe... awe...

    Snape's Xanadu fits him perfectly, if that makes sense. And you were full of lovely descriptions/comparisions with it. Great job. :D

    Now, come on, boys. You have your plan, just impliment it now. :D lol

    Awe, DA. I love your story. You had me smiling throughout it and at times laughing like a happy and less crazy Bella. ;) So... does this mean I'll get a sequel since the boys (namely Harry) are plotting? lol :D

    Author's Response:

    But...but...LAN!! I like crazy Bella!! :D lol

    I'm really glad you like it Lan. That means a lot coming from my soul sister. :D (not to mention the person I wrote it for. :P )

    Anyway, I tried to make the Auroa/Snape relationship subtle, but still obvious at the same time. Does that even make sense? And don't ask why I wanted it that way. I just did.

    Thanks Lan!!

Title: Chapter 3 20 Feb 2011 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    AWE!!!!! I'm so loving the boys. Their impromptu snowball fight was just cute. I love the way Snape gets their attention. Too cute. Then again, poor boys, yes, poor, poor boys. :D love it! *onto next*

    Author's Response:

    Hehehe...snowball fights... :D

    I briefly considered haveing one of them accidently launch a snowball at Snape...but figured he was mad enough as it was.

    I'm so so so glad you like it! Thanks Lan!

Title: Chapter 2 20 Feb 2011 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    lol... oh, boys, I so love you. lol. Awesome, DA. Three minor characters that we hardly ever see. :D Love the little tidbit of knowledge and the very interesting discovery of Muggle authors. :D Though, perhaps it's me, but do I sense a little strife between Sinistra and Pince? lol. Wonderful chapter. *onto next*

    Author's Response:

    Three characters? Oh! That's right...the others are in the next chapter. :D I hope that met your minor character quota. :P

    I tried to explain Xanadu without being overly informative...I really hope it worked. :D And the way I see it. A library is a place to gain all sorts of knowlege, so even a wizarding library would have some books by muggles. Besides, they Muggle Studies students might need to use them. :D

    Sinistra? Pince? Strife? I have no idea what you're talking about.... *instert evil grin here*

     

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 4 20 Feb 2011 10:41 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful story. Absolutely loved it :D

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1 20 Feb 2011 10:38 pm
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's "It's Draco" lines/excuse made me laugh. Your comparisons are amazing. I loved this line, "It was as if someone had let all the air out of a balloon, and left the empty shriveled shell of the toy lying on the ground to be tread upon." And this one was just awesome, "Sleep was nothing but a snare, lying in wait until it was inevitably trod over, causing it to snap close holding its victim fast." Harry's reactions to Snape are nice too. I love his constant need of affection/reaffirmation of this since as you said before Draco needs Snape's affection also. :D Great chapter *onto the next*

    Author's Response: Thanks, Lan! I'm glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 3 20 Feb 2011 10:37 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks!

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