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Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 23 Feb 2011 12:31 am
Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww...so cute. I like how you snuck the line about Charity in there too.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Yes, Charity was a rather inevitable result of finding that photograph; children of Harry's age can get very broody (in the wanting-to-have-a-sibling way) and, for a single father, that can spell mayhem lol! 
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 23 Feb 2011 12:03 am
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Liked all the ancestral photographs, and its great to see old faces from this universe. I love Reggie!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I thought it'd be fun to do a spin-off from the WtBCI series :)
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 22 Feb 2011 5:36 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fascinating collection of family members in Ch 1, and amazing story behind the unchild in Ch 2! I really liked the interactions in Parseltongue with Reggie and Salazar's portrait, and the fact that Hermione didn't freak over it! I haven't had the opportunity to read the other stories in your series yet, but I am really intrigued-- I hope to do so before long. This story served as a neat introduction to your world! :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks; I really like inventing family members (though Persephone also appears in 'Inverted') and I'm glad you liked the unchild- I thought it would be a fun twist ^^ I always enjoy writing Reggie and Salazar, who are both funny in their individual ways, and as for Hermione, well she's a grounded, open-minded character and, even in the canon, when she was given no preparation, she reacted very calmly to the revalation Harry was a parselmouth lol! Hope you enjoy WtBCI ^^
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 22 Feb 2011 3:44 am
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, matchmaker Harry. Severus and Charity... now there's a thought. A lovely, sweet tale. I wish the boy in the picture was real.

    Author's Response: Thanks; yes, that's one of the things I really wanted the story to convey, that wistful, 'might have been' feeling. However, Harry's going to try his best to give the little boy in the picture a chance lol!
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 22 Feb 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was really sweet.

    That is a very interesting concept Morgana. Creating a vision of what your child would look like.

    Great job.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ The concept is actually one I've used from real life; there are hundreds of baby-picture-generator programs on the web- you simply upload two pictures of possible parents and get a picture of your hypothetical offspring! When I discovered these generators, I could see the potential in the Lily/Severus situation and it seemed a cute idea to have Harry discover the picture ^^ (I'd also used a similar spell on the owl-breeding poppet, which is rather spooky because I didn't know about the online baby generators at that point lol!)
Title: Chapter 1: The Photograph Album 22 Feb 2011 3:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Hermione. How awful for her to lose her dad to Voldie.


    Great job Morgana. Onto the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, Hermione has a hard time in this story, not to mention the latter chapters of WtBCI. However, she has a lot of people behind her and her father's death will serve as an important lesson to the other Slytherins; collateral damage isn't pretty when viewed up close.
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 22 Feb 2011 2:50 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe... Harry is such a plotter. :D I like the way you made the boy in the photo be a what could have been scenario instead of having it be his brother. The explanation seemed real too. Nice job.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Title: Chapter 1: The Photograph Album 22 Feb 2011 2:43 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, very interesting. I like how you have Harry feel so awkward around Hermione with the death of her father. I think the mystery will be good for them too. Very nice chapter. :D

    Author's Response: Thanks: I really wanted to capture the embarrassment and discomposure that many people feel when seeing their berieved friends; so many people feel angry or upset with themselves over it but it's natural to feel unsure as to what to say/afraid of saying the wrong thing. Thankfully, Harry had Severus to support him, reassure him and take control of the situation so Harry and Hermione could get over the greeting-stage with minimal upset.
Title: Chapter 2: Trapped in Time 22 Feb 2011 2:11 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Charity Burbage!!! YAY!!!! LOL

    Wonderful, Gana! I can't wait to see Harry's matchmaking skills, when you get around to a sequel.

    I found the idea of a fake picture fascinating. I can only imagine Harry and Hermione getting ahold of this spell. Hmmm...I wonder what Hermione and Draco's child would look like...

    Excellent work Gana!!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yup, it's going to be 'The Parent Trap' all over again lol; Harry wants him a little brother ;) I based this idea on a RL situation; I was enticed into using one of the 'baby picture generators' on the web and was rather taken aback by the result, a very beautiful little boy with violet eyes and biscuit-brown hair. I thought that the wistful longing such a picture of a hypothetical child (whom circumstances made an impossibility) would be a good basis for a story and, of course, the situation could easily fit Severus Snape and Lily Evans; it's not a substantial stretch of the imagination to believe that a spell could and, indeed, would have been created and I even had precident, having used a similar spell in WtBCI! As for Harry and Hermione getting hold of the spell... a hair from Severus' hairbrush, one snagged from Charity's fuzzy jumpers; it's all too easy if you ask me, Severus even told them the name of the book!  
Title: Chapter 1: The Photograph Album 22 Feb 2011 1:57 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe!!!!

    I love it Gana! I just want to cuddle Severus every time his mother is mentioned. I love stories that have Eileen being the abusive parent and Tobias the caring one.

    Excellent chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Yeah, so do I, more because it makes a change than anything!

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