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Title: Aftermath 09 Jan 2022 7:05 am
Reviewer: Gryphonia (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry
Title: Aftermath 14 Aug 2014 3:58 am
Reviewer: Jz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Such a promising start! Looking forward to the next chapter. Btw, I LOVED your other two stories
Title: Aftermath 09 Nov 2012 1:26 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I believe the first word of the following sentence should be 'Nor' not 'Now'.

    Now did they have the deadpan expression of someone trying to hide their feelings. The three of them looked worried, sad and deadly earnest.
Title: Aftermath 06 Apr 2012 11:32 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmmmm, nicely said.
Title: Aftermath 01 Mar 2011 2:51 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Neville awwww

    as for the twins and Hermionie speaking up I am not surprised at all!!!

    hopefully the next chapter will be up soon
Title: Aftermath 01 Mar 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! Poor Neville! I really didn't expect that! I certainly hope that Uncle Algie gets the Dementor's Kiss for what he did! You did a good job in explaining Neville being an abused child by describing how his mannerisms and issues with memory and magic could be directly attributed to what Algie did to him.

    I find Harry's denial of the fact that he's been abused to be rather realistic, unfortunately. I'm looking forward to seeing just how his screening goes (because I can't see Snape allowing Harry to skiv off until Monday), and what the aftermath of all of this might be.

    Good job so far!
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 5:45 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very well-written story. I'm looking forward to more chapters to see how this plays out. Too bad, though, that you had to choose Longbottom to kill. Would have been better to choose some minor character that we hardly knew. (I'm not finding fault, just expressing my preference as a Neville admirer.)
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 4:15 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, what a story, great start. not seen one of abuse written this way. looking forward to the other chapters.
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 1:11 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great ending, loved Severus' internal monologue and your portrayal of Hermione, Fred and George's revelation. Harry's thoughts on what constitutes abuse was also very well written.
Title: Aftermath 28 Feb 2011 12:51 am
Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is one of the best, most interesting stories i've ever read on p&s! I love it! Please update soon, I know it's probably irritating to be repeatedly asked to do that, but PLEASEEEE I CAN'T WAIT! this is just great. thank you!

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