Title: Aftermath
| 14 Aug 2014 3:58 am
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Reviewer: Jz (Anonymous)
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Such a promising start! Looking forward to the next chapter. Btw, I LOVED your other two stories
Title: Aftermath
| 09 Nov 2012 1:26 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I believe the first word of the following sentence should be 'Nor' not 'Now'.
Now did they have the deadpan expression of someone trying to hide their feelings. The three of them looked worried, sad and deadly earnest.
awww Neville awwww
as for the twins and Hermionie speaking up I am not surprised at all!!!
hopefully the next chapter will be up soon
Oh my! Poor Neville! I really didn't expect that! I certainly hope that Uncle Algie gets the Dementor's Kiss for what he did! You did a good job in explaining Neville being an abused child by describing how his mannerisms and issues with memory and magic could be directly attributed to what Algie did to him.
I find Harry's denial of the fact that he's been abused to be rather realistic, unfortunately. I'm looking forward to seeing just how his screening goes (because I can't see Snape allowing Harry to skiv off until Monday), and what the aftermath of all of this might be.
Good job so far!
Title: Aftermath
| 28 Feb 2011 5:45 am
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Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Very well-written story. I'm looking forward to more chapters to see how this plays out. Too bad, though, that you had to choose Longbottom to kill. Would have been better to choose some minor character that we hardly knew. (I'm not finding fault, just expressing my preference as a Neville admirer.)
wow, what a story, great start. not seen one of abuse written this way. looking forward to the other chapters.
Great ending, loved Severus' internal monologue and your portrayal of Hermione, Fred and George's revelation. Harry's thoughts on what constitutes abuse was also very well written.
Title: Aftermath
| 28 Feb 2011 12:51 am
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Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous)
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this is one of the best, most interesting stories i've ever read on p&s! I love it! Please update soon, I know it's probably irritating to be repeatedly asked to do that, but PLEASEEEE I CAN'T WAIT! this is just great. thank you!
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